Deconstructing: Sins of the Saviors (Rise of the Runelords Book 5)

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Rise of the Runelords series:

Rise of the Runelords Anniversary Edition by Wayne Reynolds, © 2012, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

We bare our souls, heedlessly pressing forward into the Rise of the Runelords Adventure Path from Paizo. My goal, as you well know by now, is to break each book down into its essential story beats, freeing up room for more character-driven bits and overall simplifying and focusing the campaign. Today is another day of heavy cuts and lots of changes, so it’s good to review these caveats:

First and foremost, these edits are to my preference for the game that I want to run. What I consider “essential,” you may not, and vice-versa. You would make (or have made) different decisions, which is both natural and part of the fun. Feel free to comment below if you see different opportunities.

Second, get ready to clutch your pearls. If you’ve run or played in Rise of the Runelords, I’m going to be deleting your favorite side quest, or NPC, or completely rewriting villain’s motivations and backstories. When I’m done, it’s not going to resemble the story you know.

Third, there will be rampant spoilers—in fact, once I dive in, these posts are essentially spoilers from start to finish. If you are a player in one of these APs or plan to be, these articles aren’t for you. (If you plan on GMing it, however… welcome!)

Finally, I don’t yet know what game system I’ll be using to run this Adventure Path, but it likely won’t be Pathfinder. Try not to get caught up in how dramatically I’m reducing the possible XP or treasure, or what I’m doing to CR of encounters. For a peek inside my thoughts on systems, you can start here.

Onto Book 5!

Rise of the Runelords 5: Sins of the Saviors

Sins of the Saviors by Wayne Reynolds, © 2008, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

Sins of the Saviors, by Stephen S. Greer, differs from the previous four books in the Adventure Path in several ways. First, it doesn’t have a “party against X creature type” conceit (for which I find myself strangely disappointed), so there’s no challenge of keeping the encounters varied. Second, the entire module is basically a large-scale dungeon, called Runeforge, with seven wings that the party can tackle in any order. As a result, there are a whopping TEN chapters to this book, seven of which are the wings.

Thankfully, some things never change, and we still start the module with pages of dense and complicated backstory. The gist is that, during Thassilon’s height, the Runelords created a “neutral ground” for studying and advancing magical theory, called Runeforge. Each Runelord maintained a wing of the laboratory, and they all met once per year to collectively review Runforge’s progress. It existed in its own pocket universe, where its arcane researchers never aged. The problem came when the cataclysm toppled Thassilon and the Runelords went into hibernation (using a spell developed in Runeforge!), and the laboratory was left trapped and alone. As decades turned to centuries which turned to millennia, things in Runeforge got both weird and scary, and the PCs are about to unseal it for the first time in 10,000 years.

Yes, that’s all complicated, but not needlessly so. More importantly, it’s a cool-as-shit idea for a high-level adventure. It’s possible that I’ve seeded the idea of Runeforge or its history into earlier parts of the AP, but most likely the story of Runeforge can unfurl if the party has an intact Thassilonian library at the end of Book 4.

Chapter 1: The Scribbler’s Rhyme

It’s difficult to know where the party will be at the end of Book 4 during their downtime. I can imagine them staying in the library (laughter echoing all around them), conducting months—or even years—of research. I can imagine them returning to Magnimar or Fort Rannick to check up on long-term projects they’ve begun there, or to put their newfound wealth to use. I’ll have a table discussion about how the party wants to use downtime, and how much time to fast forward until they return to Sandpoint. I’m comfortable with this time lapse being literally years or more, since Karzoug isn’t going anywhere, and his primary agents have, to the party’s knowledge, been defeated. Book 5 kicks off whenever they return to Sandpoint for the first time. Either the town is still recovering from the giants’ raid, or it’s settled into a happy stupor years later.

The module says that, days after the raid, there was an earthquake that opened the way to ancient Thassilonian ruins (remember that mysterious blocked passage in Book 1?). This earthquake set in motion Karzoug’s rise and a whole bunch of other events, some of them divine, that the players would never understand, leading to the resurrection of a Lamashtu worshipper named the Scribbler, and this powerful madman then created a complicated riddle on how to find Runeforge. The whole setup is exhausting, and for me it works much better simply to say:

  • The raid by giants and a dragon caused all sorts of structural damage across the town.
  • Some of that damage opened the passageway below the Sandpoint Glassworks. Because that building has been largely abandoned since Book 1, it took a while for anyone to notice.
  • What the townsfolk discovered was an ancient Thassilonian ruin, which has the locals Brodert Quink (scholar), Veznutt Parooh (librarian), and Ilsoari Gandethus (teacher and ex-adventurer) in a frenzy. Scholars from Magnimar have even arrived to study the ruins!  
  • It so happens that, thanks to the Thassilonian library in the Iron Peaks, the PCs have enough information to understand the writing and its meaning.
  • What the ancient ruins suggest is: a) the history and purpose of the Runeforge (if that hasn’t already been revealed… the module provides good info throughout the first third to give players whenever it makes sense), b) its location at Rimeskull, a mountain in northwestern Varisia, and c) some suggestion that powerful magic and legendary weapons await anyone who can access it. If the library was somehow destroyed in Book 4 and the party never gained access to its knowledge, then the various scholars studying the place since the discovery can provide this information.

What I like about this setup is twofold: 1) It avoids the sort of needlessly complex backstory that confuses players and makes events and locations in Adventure Paths feel random. In this case, cutting the Scribbler means skirting yet another dungeon full of random traps and monsters before spending the entire module on another dungeon full of random traps and monsters. It also sidesteps a riddle, which I have never found players to embrace. 2) Beginning this way allows the party some time to interact with Sandpoint locals, revisiting any relationships that have developed there, and do some roleplaying with familiar NPCs before again venturing far afield and dungeon-delving. Otherwise, Sandpoint is little more than an afterthought the rest of the AP.

One story beat to insert here that will help the setup of Book 6 is if the location to Xin-Shalast is known, but the route to get there is still needing some research. After all, 10,000 years have passed and there’s been a cataclysm, so there is considerable work to puzzle out how the geography today matches any ancient maps. The team of Brodert & company can be working on this issue while the PCs are gone.

If the idea of millennia-old magic and powerful artifacts isn’t enough to entice the players to seek out Runeforge, I’d seed in ominous portents that Karzoug is still threatening to rise from his long slumber, and the party’s attempts at puzzling out the location of Xin-Shalast has met dead ends. Basically, the PCs need to feel it’s their responsibility to stop Karzoug’s rise, and that Runeforge might equip them to do so.

Chapter 2: Seeking Runeforge 

I’m a little sad that the book handwaves the journey to Rimeskull, saying that the party now has access to magic that should make traveling long distances trivial. As a personal aside, this sort of logic totally breaks my immersion into fantasy worlds because of the implications of what even a handful of wizards of level 15+ could do. I’m equally an anti-fan of resurrection spells as well because of the implications for worldbuilding, and it’s why I push back on the “every Thassilonian ruin has protective, restorative magic on it, preserving it over 10,000 years” idea. I’m not trying for realism in my games (which would be silly), but I am striving for a sense of wonder and danger whenever players explore the world or find something from ancient, toppled empires.

Anyway, I’ve mentioned several times that I don’t know what system I’ll be using to run this AP, but—because I’m not inserting a ticking clock here—it’s true that even without easy group-transportation magic, the PCs are likely formidable enough that overland travel isn’t deadly for them. Heck, maybe they even raise an army in Magnimar to march on Rimeskull. Whatever the case, I’ll probably make this a travel montage at best, and pick up the action as they arrive on the shore of Lake Stormunder, at the foot of the towering Rimeskull.

On the shore is a Stonehenge-like circle of seven stone monuments, each representing one of the Thassilonian Runelords. The module has them magically preserved (sigh) and somehow both visible yet untouched over ten millennia. They represent a puzzle, where a different sort of magic is needed to unlock each pillar. Doing so awakens the place’s guardian, a white dragon in a cave above them. Though I’m loathe to insert too many puzzles in my games, I do like the idea of the monument and dragon guardian. In my game, the stones will be worn to unrecognizability, and I’ll let the players easily discern that they represent the seven sins of the Runelords and see what they do. If they try something reasonable, I’m happy to allow their actions to succeed and awaken the ancient white dragon Arkrhyst.

Once the puzzle has been solved and dragon defeated (or sent fleeing), the dragon’s icy cave has a dragon’s treasure horde and a long tunnel leading to the activated portal to Runeforge. The module offers traps and earth elemental guardians, but the puzzle and dragon feel like enough protection to me, especially if back in Thassilonian times people came and went from Runeforge with an even passing regularity. Perhaps I’d add shattered remains of things to show there once were layers of protection that either Arkrhyst dismantled long ago or that have failed with time.

The portal to Runeforge is open, so all the PCs need to do is step through into a pocket dimension untouched since the cataclysm that ended the Runelords’ rule. I’ll try and make this moment as climactic as possible, playing up the vast mystery awaiting them. Once they step in, the portal closes and they’re trapped in Runeforge until Chapter 10.

Chapter 3: Runeforge and the Abjurant Halls

The party has entered the pocket dimension of Runeforge! The “arrival” location is the Runeforge itself, a prismatic and shimmering pool surrounded by statues of the seven Runelords, set within an intricate Sihedron Rune motif on the floor, with tunnels extending behind each statue. Here, finally, I would make everything perfectly preserved. The PCs can for the first time see Thassilonian architecture and styles in intricate detail, including each of the Runelords’ appearance. The dimensional rules of Runeforge are such that PCs need not eat, drink, or sleep, which is a natural extension of the “nothing decays here” logic.

There are cool descriptions in the module of what happens if a PC touches the Runeforge pool. There’s also a terrific suggestion to take some time to jot down the greatest “sin” and “virtue” for each PC based on the many hours of watching them in play—I’ll spend some game time with a table discussion on this topic, allowing the players to self-diagnose and offer suggestions to each other. I love the idea that each PC is drawn to or repelled from one of the statues and the tunnel beyond it, and that those character’s sins and virtues become featured within that particular wing. The module suggests also tying these things to Pathfinder’s schools of magic, which I’m less inclined to do. Instead, I would find mechanical bonuses and penalties for PCs who exhibit certain sins and virtues, and possibly even new abilities they can use within those wings. Maybe there are even permanent changes to the PCs after visiting certain wings. My goal will be to have the PCs fully explore their own motivations while in Runeforge, and exit transformed somehow by the experience—something that gets showcased at the end of this book. Doing so means some heavy homebrewing the rest of the module, but all that work sounds fun to me.

The party will enter Runeforge with only a vague sense that powerful things exist here that can help them in defeating Karzoug. Over the course of exploring the “dungeon,” it will become apparent that it’s possible to create Runeforged items—epic and powerful artifacts. The knowledge of how to do so is spread over three wings, in Chapters 5, 7, and 9. Whichever of these wings the PCs visit first should include a fairly clear revelation in this regard, without clueing them into where the rest of the information is.

For reasons I don’t love, the wing of Envy is most accessible in the module as written, and thus detailed in this chapter. I would instead leave Envy as equal to the other wings, drawing PCs to it no more or less easily than the other wings. In my game, then, this wing and any of the others outlined below are of equal chance to be explored by the party, and a lot of the order of them exploring them will depend on the sins/virtues exercise done at the table.

Still, let’s talk the hall of Envy here: Belimarius was the Runelord of Envy, and her statue shows a heavyset, gray-haired woman with a sneer. Remember that the conceit of this dungeon is that there were once mages and scholars given eternal life to toil away at Runeforge and do magical research for the Runelords, but over 10,000 years things got decidedly weird and awful. It makes total sense, then, that the mages loyal to Belimarius tried to wage war on the other wings, but both turned on themselves and were crushed before their coup could occur. The wing of envy, then, is an ancient site of a great battle, scarred and torn asunder by magic. I would (as with most of these wings) erase the specific details provided in the module and use them only for inspiration. In my mind, everything here is destroyed (i.e. no treasure… it’s all fragments of items, monuments, and such), and maaaaaybe there are frozen bones, or other signs of the people who once resided here.

In the module, there is a trap and a fiendish mustard jelly. Instead, I’d riff off the jelly idea and say that the battle created some sort of magical residue goo that has gained sentience and now prowls the ruins here. Maybe, since this is the hall of envy, it even has limited mimicry powers. Anyway, it tries to engulf and destroy the party.

Chapter 4: The Ravenous Crypts

Zutha was the Runelord of Gluttony, and his statue is that of an obese man with chunks of flesh missing enough to show bones. That’s because Zutha was a lich, and thus his mages spent their millennia within Runeforge studying necromancy. I’m disappointed that the story of this wing wasn’t how the magic of the pocket dimension made food and drink unnecessary, and what that did to the focus on gluttony. Instead, it’s about the inhabitants turning to cannibalism (but why, though?) and the only “living” things roaming the halls now are undead monstrosities and Azaven, the head necromancer (also a lich). Because the cannibalism angle makes no sense to me, I’d tweak this story and say that the mages of the Ravenous Crypts were desperate for body parts to further their research and so began using their own members as parts factories. The only inhabitants, then, are a) Frankenstein’s monster-like amalgam undead creatures of horror, b) desperately starving incorporeal ghosts and wraiths, hungry for living energy to feed on (gotta include hungry ghosts!), and c) Azaven, who’s become a crazed hermit of a lich over the past several thousand years. Indeed, I imagine Azaven hosting vast banquets of magically-conjured food and drink for illusory guests. Perhaps the final encounter with Azaven isn’t a combat one, in fact, if the PCs agree to gorge themselves on his prepared feast, and over dinner they can ply him for information about Runeforge.

Chapter 5: The Vault of Greed

I’ve been eliminating traps from the other wings, because they feel like an old-school D&D trope that GMs tend to enjoy a lot more than players, especially when overdone. Here, though, in Runelord Karzoug’s area of Runeforge, the traps and hazards make perfect sense. It’s the Vault of Greed and thus is locked tight and protected. There’s a crushing door, polymorphing mists, and stone golems in the module as written, but I would keep going. Indeed, I find the map here too pedestrian, and will probably borrow a dungeon from another adventure that is more tricksy, with secret doors, false treasures, and on and on. I’ll go as over-the-top as possible here, a real OSR-type homage.

In the module, the lore is that when the mages of Envy staged their coup attempt, all the top mages of Greed were slain, and the remaining apprentices locked their vault up tight, bickered amongst themselves, and eventually killed each other off. The remaining mage is Ordikon, who has transmuted his skin to mithral metal and is quite mad. I like this backstory well enough to keep it. Ordikon will be waiting at the end of a mind-numbing series of traps and secret doors, ready to attack to keep the PCs from his vast treasure horde. Among these treasures, as written, is a “pool of elemental arcana” which can recharge magic items. That’s a cool idea—and a nice example of what the magical research of greed would produce—so I’ll keep it. This vault is also a nice place to provide some of the information needed to create Runeforged weapons, with the other bits in Chapters 7 and 9.

Chapter 6: The Iron Cages of Lust

The Runelord of Lust was Sorshen, and her statue depicts a beautiful, voluptuous, and naked human woman with long flowing hair. I like the idea in the module behind this wing but would push it even further. In the book, a succubus named Delvahine eventually took rulership over the mages here and tore down any edifice to learning or magical research. Instead, it’s now one immense pleasure den of a room, full of demons and mind-enslaved mages who are endlessly pursuing debaucherous fun. In the module, the place has an S&M focus and there are a few private quarters. I’d instead say that over thousands of years every conceivable kink is present here, and no one has any shame or time for privacy. What the PCs face is a barrage of mind-assaults to charm them into joining the fun (imagine, for the beings trapped here, what seeing “new blood” would be like and how desperately they would want to experience their newness). If there is a PC prone to lust, there’s a real danger of becoming ensnared here. If there’s one prone to pious chastity, a big demon- and mage-fight could break out. So, this wing could be a real quickie (ha!) experience or quite complicated. And it’s also a good opportunity to ensure safety tools are in place at the table, only providing a level of description of what’s going on to fuel everyone’s imagination without stepping into icky territory.

Chapter 7: The Shimmering Veils

Xanderghul, Runelord of Pride, is depicted as a strikingly handsome human man in extravagant peacock-feather robes. The backstory in the module on this wing is the sort of complexity that the players will never uncover, but it has the seed of an idea that I really like: Vraxeris, the lead mage of Xanderghul’s contingent within Runeforge, mastered the art of cloning. Now only he remains—a whole bunch of him, actually. It’s the perfect sort of conceit for the sin of pride, and thus this wing will include many duplicates who will either try to manipulate or fight the PCs, keeping them away from the stores of knowledge that he’s accumulated over millennia. In fact, I like this idea so much that I would seed Vraxeris into the other wings where appropriate—there is at least one zombie in Chapter 4 with Vraxeris’ head, there are multiple copies of Vraxeris ensnared in the scene within Chapter 6, and a Vraxeris clone leads a faction in Chapter 9. Moreover, deep in this wing is “Vraxeris the First,” who guards lots and lots of research journals. Among these are part of the information needed to create Runeforged weapons (the others are in Chapters 5 and 9).

Chapter 8: The Festering Maze

The statue of Krune, Runelord of Sloth, is of a short, robed human man with a hooked nose and beady eyes, with every inch of his skin carved with magical runes (he’s probably my favorite Runelord because he mastered the art of rune magic but never let anyone know what he was or wasn’t capable of, so people were wary of him). I’m fine with the backstory of this wing: It was developed as a set of wading pools and an elaborate “lazy river,” meant for meditation, relaxation, and soaking, with very little space set aside for actual magical research. Over thousands of years and due to other rival factions, the water was poisoned. Now, it’s a toxic set of cesspools and filth, with no wardens of sloth still alive. The entire area, then, is essentially a hazard, with poisonous vapors in the air and disease- and poison-ridden waters flowing through it. In the module, there is one surviving, obese lord of sloth, but his insertion feels unrealistic to me. I would instead add some sort of custom “sewer elemental” to the mix, plus a tentacled monstrosity or two. If the party braves the mess of these halls, in the room where the sloth lord is supposed to be, I would have his corpse instead, and throw in some treasure.

Chapter 9: The Halls of Wrath

Finally, Runelord Alaznist is depicted as a human woman with wild hair and a somewhat insane expression, wearing a flowing dress and wielding a thorny ranseur. The idea of this wing in the module is that the mages of wrath were the ones to develop “sinspawn” soldiers (a creature that has occasionally appeared within the AP that I’ve cut out), and after hundreds of generations have developed a honed army excited to battle the PCs. I’m replacing this conceit with the idea that the mages split into warring factions over the millennia and now have cordoned off four distinct “domains” within the small wing, full of long-standing blood feuds between them. In the module, there are four parts of the map connected by teleportation pads, but I’m not sure how prevalent teleportation magic will be in my Golarion, so I’d likely replace the map with something circular with warring boundaries and a central gladiatorial ring where they ritualistically send champions to battle.

Is this rewriting a lot of work? Of course. But it sounds fun to come up with the four factions, what they have against each other, and how they’ve established their “army” (keep in mind, these are small maps, and they’ve whittled each other’s forces down by attrition over countless years). I’d also lean heavily into what’s already within the module, with a preliminary sketch of these four factions:

  1. One mage—let’s make it a Vraxeris clone!—has fashioned an army of golems of various materials as his army.
  2. A Glabrezu (treachery demon) demon killed and ate the soul of a mage and has taken over their faction, complete with summoning demon minions to its cause.
  3. A pyromancer mage uses artifacts to enhance her powers and keep her borders safe, probably with the help of summoned fire elementals.
  4. Highlady Athroxis has dedicated her research to enchanted armor and weapons, so she’s like a one-woman War Machine. It’s within Highlady Athroxis’ bedroom or laboratory that she keeps the last piece of the information needed to make Runeforged weapons.

The party’s presence is sure to unbalance the ongoing war in the Halls of Wrath. Maybe Highlady Athroxis enlists their aid, or maybe the PCs manage to sneak through the mayhem as the factions battle one another, or maybe a diplomatic PC negotiates a temporary peace. Whatever the case, even if this isn’t the final wing the PCs encounter, it will at some point occur to them that Highlady Athroxis holds part of the Runeforge weapon “recipe,” and so this wing is one they may visit twice.

Chapter 10: Weapons of Power

Once the PCs have the information they need from Chapters 5, 7, and 9, they can return to the Runeforge pool at the center of the pocket dimension (where they first arrived) and begin the process. As they get ready to create the first item, however, Karzoug becomes aware of their activities from within his waning slumber. Although this idea is a little “how does magic work in this world, again?,” it’s fun and cinematic so I’ll keep it: The statue of Karzoug in the room grows and animates (into basically a custom stone golem), trying to eliminate the PCs before they can accomplish their task. It’s a nice opportunity to villain monologue, and I’d have Karzoug continue to fill in his motivations and backstory throughout the battle.

With the stone construct destroyed (or after 4 rounds of combat have elapsed, since he can’t keep up the possession indefinitely), the party can proceed with creating Runeforged items. Now, there’s a whole process within an Appendix of the AP for creating these items, and I don’t love it. It also makes the distinction between regular Runeforged weapons and “dominant” weapons, in a way that influences the final battle with Karzoug. Everything here is overly complicated, from my perspective. Instead, I’ll again try and make this moment an epic one for our heroes – presumably, they’ve had to face the seeds of their sinful leanings while within Runeforge and lean upon the seeds of their virtues. I would handwave the ritual part of each item’s construction, and instead work with each player to:

  • Choose an existing item on their person to submerge within the Runeforge pool.
  • Let that player narrate a personal transformation, a way in which they’re either fully leaning into one of their virtues or turning away from one of their sins.
  • Create a custom item based on that narration that focuses on one of the seven virtues. So, after the ritual a PC might have a Ring of Charity, or a Sword of Temperance, or a Shield of Humility, or whatever. The trick is to make each item completely “Squee!”-worthy and delightful for each player without making them game-breaking. But this is a major milestone in the campaign and setting up an epic conclusion, so I also wouldn’t scrimp.

With their Runeforged items created and their virtues fully embraced, a portal appears to exit Runeforge back to Rimeskull. I’d make up a plausible reason why the portal won’t open again, so that they can’t just send a parade of people into Runeforge to make more weapons. An example idea is that the battle with Karzoug’s statue destabilizes the central pool, and each forged weapon increased this destabilization. With each newly forged weapon, the place shudders and statues fall. When they leave Runeforge, it’s clear that the pocket dimension is dying, or at least becoming closed off from the Material Plane. Regardless, Runeforge has served its purpose, and now the party is ready to take on Karzoug in his resting place of Xin-Shalast.

Deconstructed Sins of the Saviors

Whew. Whereas in each previous book of this Adventure Path I cut major sections and simplified backstories and details, in this book I’m doing a lot of rewriting and custom rules, adding as much as I take away. My goal is to keep the spirit of the original module intact while creating a game that I would thoroughly enjoy running. Runforge, as I said before, is a very cool idea for a high-level dungeon, and it sounds like a blast. These rewrites have created something I’m excited to dive into, but I’d encourage any GM to use my ideas as simply a license to make these Adventure Paths your own. Certainly my “yum” is not to everyone’s tastes.

On one hand, the story beats of this book are easy to map. On the other, it’s a lot of chapters with a lot of cuts and changes! Here is Plottr’s visualization (so big I needed to break it in two parts!):

We’ve got one more book to go, and then a “Reconstructing” post to put it all back together! I hope this long and winding journey has been fun for you. Please do drop a comment or email me at jaycms@yahoo.com!

Deconstructing: Fortress of the Stone Giants (Rise of the Runelords Book 4)

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Rise of the Runelords series:

Rise of the Runelords Anniversary Edition by Wayne Reynolds, © 2012, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

We continue our march ahead into the Rise of the Runelords Adventure Path from Paizo, breaking each book down into what I consider the essential story beats. Why? Because doing so frees up room for more character-driven bits and overall simplifies and focuses the campaign. But you know all of that, because you started at Book 1 above and have been here the whole time! Still, especially for today, I’ll restate my caveats:

First and foremost, these edits are to my preference for the game that I want to run. What I consider “essential,” you may not, and vice-versa. You would make (or have made) different decisions, which is both natural and part of the fun. Feel free to comment below if you see different opportunities.

Second, get ready to clutch your pearls. If you’ve run or played in Rise of the Runelords, I’m going to be deleting your favorite side quest, or NPC, or completely rewriting villain’s motivations and backstories. When I’m done, it’s not going to resemble the story you know.

Third, there will be rampant spoilers—in fact, once I dive in, these posts are essentially spoilers from start to finish. If you are a player in one of these APs or plan to be, these articles aren’t for you. (If you plan on GMing it, however… welcome!)

Finally, I don’t yet know what game system I’ll be using to run this Adventure Path, but it likely won’t be Pathfinder. Try not to get caught up in how dramatically I’m reducing the possible XP or treasure, or what I’m doing to CR of encounters. For a peek inside my thoughts on systems, you can start here.

Onto Book 4, Fortress of the Stone Giants, by Wolfgang Baur!

Rise of the Runelords 4: Fortress of the Stone Giant

Fortress of the Stone Giants by Wayne Reynolds, © 2007, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

From the many reviews I’ve read of this Adventure Path, this book is many people’s least favorite, due in large part to the repetitive giant fights (and yes, our “favored foe” of Book 4 is, indeed, giants) and just general focus on combat without roleplaying. As a result, I’m going to take my surgeon’s story scalpel to Book 4 with abandon and, when I’m done, it will be roughly equivalent to half the gameplay time of the other modules in the AP. All the caveats above are in full effect today.

Despite the heavy editing below, I’m not super critical of this book’s pages of preamble backstory. The gist is this: Mokmurian was a runt of a stone giant and threw himself into becoming a wizard to compensate. He was eventually exiled from his clan and went searching for ancient Thassilonian ruins that had been hinted at within his magical tomes. Doing so led him to an ancient library, then to Xin-Shalast, Runelord Karzoug’s former epicenter of power and where his tomb resides. He’s now on a mission to raise Karzoug from his grave, and in so doing has formed a monstrous army to retake the land in Karzoug’s name. It’s Mokmurian who taught his allies—including the lamia sisters Xanesha and Lucrecia, and the spellcaster Barl Breakbones—the ritual of the Sihedron Runes on greedy souls, where the deaths of those inscribed fuel Karzoug’s revival. This ritual has been weakening the humans and their settlements, and the time to attack in full force is drawing near. Are there some plot holes to criticize here? Maybe, but it’s a coherent motivation for Mokmurian and explains some of the events across the first three books.

Chapter 1: Stones Over Sandpoint

The module assumes that the PCs hear of Mokmurian’s plans to raid Sandpoint, and hustle to help prepare its defenses. I don’t like this setup, which puts the players in a constant, go-go-go mindset over multiple books. Instead, I would begin the book sometime after they’ve returned from their debrief with Mayer Grobaras in Magnimar, at least a season later, but maybe perhaps more. During this time, Mokmurian has learned of the deaths of the two lamia sisters, Xanesha and Lucrecia, and the fall of Fort Rannick. He now knows that a squad of “small folk” are looking to thwart his revival of Runelord Karzoug and decides to send a force to deal with these supposed heroes once and for all.

This motivation replaces what’s in the module, that there is a secret Runeforge buried in one of the Hellstorm Flumes, one of which is the old lighthouse in Sandpoint. Mokmurian, as written, has sent scouting forces to collect stones from each Flume, which he can magically investigate to decide which is the location that Karzoug wants destroyed (and don’t get me started on why he wants it destroyed, which is too complex to convey here).

And so, in my version, the adventure begins at dawn on a normal day in Sandpoint, with the thunderous crack of stone against stone as a boulder strikes the north wall. The PCs wake to find themselves under attack and must rally themselves and the town against a force of stone giants, dire bears, and… a red dragon! Very cool, and a fun way to jolt the party into action.

The module outlines the various places in town the giants attack and what happens round by round. I’ll use this outline as a guidepost only and instead set up a) where each PC is at dawn and how they swing into action, giving each “group” in close proximity an initial encounter, and then b) 2-3 additional set pieces as the party forms up and organizes the town’s defenses. To me, these can be time lapsed, making the invasion seem grander in scale and allowing the players some cinematic control over how they deal with such a surprising and intimidating force. If the game system I’m using has large-scale warfare or siege rules, now is a good time to try them out. My hope would be to spotlight NPCs and locations that the players care about.

Eventually, the PCs repel the invading force, sending them in full retreat. If the party captures someone to question, the giant or dragon will talk of Mokmurian’s hatred for humans and how he will soon wipe them from the region, playing up the greedy nature of anyone questioned (“All the wealth you’ve stolen from the land will be mine… I mean ours, now!”). If not, they can track the retreating giants to Jorgenfist. Either way, the message is clear: Mokmurian knows of the PCs and considers them a threat. Today’s victory won’t stop him, and next time the attack may be worse.

Chapter 2: Journey to Jorgenfist 

Since he’s a wizard, Mokmurian has made his base of operations not within Xin-Shalast, but instead the Vale of the Black Tower, where he first discovered an ancient Thassilonian library. He’s renamed the place Jorgenfist, and it’s here that his monstrous army is most concentrated. Jorgenfist is ~320 miles from Sandpoint, which the module estimates at about 15 days of travel. If the players enjoyed some overland travel mechanics in Book 3, I’d bust them out here again, allowing for a) a non-giant encounter or two, b) signs of the army’s mobilization (the module provides nice examples here), including wild rumors from anyone the party meets, and c) showcasing Golarion, especially since there are so many rich descriptions and maps of the area available. If not, this can be more of a travel montage.

Eventually, the party reaches the Storval Rise, a plateau of dizzying heights above the fertile lowlands below, and above which are the known lands of giants. The primary way to access the plateau is the Storval Stairs, which “rise in 2-foot steps, and are flanked on either side by immense statues of Runelord Karzoug (although the southern statue has finally begun to crumble and erode) and walls of ancient towers, buildings, and dwellings.” Half a dozen hill giants guard the Stairs, and beyond them are the Iron Peaks, and it here where the PCs will find Jorgenfist. The signs of a growing army (mostly giants, but other monstrous creatures as well) are obvious the closer the party gets, and there should be at least one encounter with giant patrols or giants heeding Mokmurian’s call.

It sounds like I’m shortening this chapter dramatically, but I’m not. The point is to make the journey to Jorgenfist both interesting and to demonstrably increase the scale and size of the threat the PCs face.

Chapter 3: Into the Valley of the Black Tower

Within the Iron Peaks is a valley marked by a black tower, once forbidden by the stone giants but now the epicenter of Mokmurian and his growing power. When the party first sees the valley, the size of the army is overwhelming: seven large camps of giant tents and yurts surround the tower, representing literally hundreds of giants of various kinds and tribes and far too big a force to tackle directly. If they’re able to get closer and take in details, it’s also clear that each one of the giants has been branded with a Sihedron Rune, which the creatures consider Mokmurian’s symbol but which ultimately is an opportunity to fuel Karzoug’s rise with every giant’s death, assuming Mokmurian can properly fuel their greed by promising them wealth from conquering the humans’ lands.

There’s also a device in the module called a Runeslave Cauldron, which is an ancient Thassilonian artifact used to enslave any giant who’s having doubts. Not only does this device feel overly convenient, the logic of it is difficult for me to imagine… why not just enslave them all and ensure loyalty? How are giants okay watching dissenters from their own clans magically enslaved? How do they even get dissenting giants to the Cauldron deep within the bowels of the library? I much prefer the scene to be a fragile alliance, one in which only the greediest of giant clans have rallied around Mokmurian but they still squabble between factions and sometimes question his leadership. There is terrific detail about the seven tribes who’ve gathered at Jorgenfist, and I’d use this detail to make any interactions with the giants interesting and diverse. If the party can somehow sow discord as a first gambit to infiltrating Mokmurian’s stronghold, that sounds awesome.

It’s up to the PCs to figure out how they navigate the army of giants and enter Jorgenfist. As always, I find the place too complex in backstory and monster type for my tastes (don’t get me started about the mummified Thassilonian monk who, after the party defeats him, carries a scroll case that somehow has intact scrolls—after 10,000 years!—and a “golden ticket” type entrance to the lower library), but the parts I’d keep are a) the red dragon from Chapter 1, whose is here if it survived the raid on Sandpoint, plus b) dire bear and mammoth pens, the giants’ warmounts. Every other threat should be various types of giant, made diverse and interesting by the content in the module. Jorgenfist itself is a former Thassilonian library, so I’d play up the ancient wonder of it all, though unlike the module I would make it vastly worn down, without any hazards or beings from Thassilon still active.

Chapter 4: Under Jorgenfist

Below the tower is a series of caves that I would, quite simply, skip and say don’t exist. It’s a dizzying parade of encounters which are a little mind-numbing in their sheer volume and offers few connections to other story beats. There are (takes deep breath) dire bears, stone giants, a stone giant general, Mokmurian’s chef, more stone giants, a stone giant elder ghost, a kobold barbarian (don’t ask), redcaps, ogres, more stone giants, even more stone giants, a rune-infused hill giant, two young red dragons, lamia clerics, and trolls. None of these encounters meaningfully advance or enhance the story, and I can’t imagine being a player and having what amounts to literally months of real time to experience combat after combat with no roleplaying at all. This section of the book, it seems to me, is what the reviews primarily criticize.

The one character I would preserve from this chapter is Conna the Wise, the only elder from Mokmurian’s original clan who joined his cause. She’s interesting because she’s a keen observer and someone Mokmurian has taken into confidence, so she knows him well. Most importantly, she’s decided that his goals are not for giantkind’s benefit but rather borne of greed and an obsession with Karzoug. She knows of the PCs, and that they’ve infiltrated Jorgenfist. She surreptitiously approaches the party and offers to help them. Her presence is an interesting wrinkle, and I love that the party finds an unexpected insider who wants to thwart the BBEG even though she loves him (not romantically, more as an aunt). So, while I’d eliminate this whole level of the map, I’d seed Conna earlier… perhaps she’s wandering the tents outside of Jorgenfist, or more likely she seeks out the party once they’ve gained entrance. Then, the party has an ally which can play out in all sorts of ways. She won’t act directly against Mokmurian, but she won’t prevent the party from killing him if that’s what’s needed in order to steer the giants from their present course.

Chapter 5: The Ancient Library

I’m truly confused by the choices surrounding the ancient library’s backstory as written. An order of “Therassic wizard-monks” who once dwelt here were not directly affiliated with Karzoug, but instead worshipped a god of scholars called the Peacock Spirit, and they trafficked with devils from Hell. Oh, and Hounds of Tindalos are here, so there are no right angles in the place. What the what? Why not have the library that has captured Mokmurian’s obsession and fueled his power be directly tied to the Runelord Karzoug? Wasn’t this location in the heart of his realm, long ago? It’s just baffling, and I wonder how many players would even begin to guess at how all this lore fits together.

As a result, I would fundamentally reskin the library to be classically Thassilonian, a monument to Karzoug’s insatiable greed for knowledge and power. For the first time, the PCs will be experiencing something 100% focused on Karzoug, and so I’d hit them between the eyes with it. Sihedron Runes everywhere, crumbling but lavish furnishings, the highest and grandest of ceilings, gold and gemstones galore, and constructs or demons (not devils—demons are more tied to Karzoug’s backstory) that somehow have multiple arms, or are made of shining gold, or other signals of greed. I’m not entirely sure why the sin of greed is so underplayed in the AP until now, but I’d amp it up. There is exactly one creature (other than Mokmurian) I’d keep from this chapter of the module as written, which is a clockwork librarian that has been repairing itself for millennia. Speaking of which, I like the idea that Thassilonian wizards concentrated preservative magic into the library to keep it timeless, which is a storytelling crutch that, to me, is thrown around too frequently in “ancient civilization” ruins but here makes sense. I would say that those magics have largely failed over 10,000 years (again, this is a dizzying amount of time), but these are far more recognizable ruins than any the party has seen to date, and the books are intact enough that they’ve allowed Mokmurian to become a powerful wizard.

Little runty Mokmurian, all ten feet of him, isolates deep in the library, only emerging to give speeches or bring his lieutenants to heel. I like the idea that he’s a chip-on-his-shoulder runt, and I’m disappointed the module didn’t do a “Oz behind the curtain” thing with him, where the persona Mokmurian uses to rule is far grander and more intimidating than the actual giant. Alas. Maybe that would have fit well if Karzoug had been the Runelord of pride.

It’s impossible to know what the setup is for the final encounter against Mokmurian, because there are countless ways the PCs could have gained entrance to this inner sanctum. Perhaps the PCs are leading a splinter group of giants they’ve convinced to rebel against their leader, aided by the revelations of Conna the Wise. Perhaps they’ve largely managed to avoid confrontation and have ninja-snuck into the library, surprising Mokmurian in a vulnerable moment. Perhaps the party’s entrance has been loud, and Mokmurian has summoned his most loyal followers outside the library to blitz the party. Whatever the case, the intent would be to make the confrontation with Mokmurian feel like a proper boss battle. If it happens in the library, part of the fun would be attempting to preserve the priceless tomes and artifacts of history surrounding everyone, something Mokmurian would be attempting as much as any history-minded PC.

A detail from the module I like: Immediately before Mokmurian falls, he is briefly controlled by Karzoug’s spirit. His countenance changes, he gives a brief, taunting villain speech, and then leaves Mokmurian to his fate. Because we’re getting into higher-level and more epic play, I’d probably do something like make Karzoug’s mocking laughter continue echoing in the valley until the Runelord is defeated at the end of Book 6. These APs should be about saving the world (or at least, the world the PCs know), so I’m in favor of permanent, fairy-tale like changes to the environment based on their adventures.

Either killing Mokmurian or getting him to flee is enough to unravel the weak alliances among the seven tribes. Again, the aftermath could play out in several different ways, from warring tribes in the valley to a treaty with the party on behalf of Varisia. Perhaps Conna the Wise steps in to lead the giants to a brighter future. Again, the goal is to make the PC’s actions matter and push them into becoming truly heroes of the age.

If it’s intact, the Thassilonian library is a tremendous resource to the PCs. History nerds and scholars rejoice, because the library can unlock full lore dumps about Thassilon, the Runelords generally, and Karzoug specifically. If one or more of the PCs are keenly interested in this lore, there is huge payoff here. It’s also an opportunity to fill in any blanks the players have on what’s happened up until now. The module provides example book titles to make the lore dumps more immersive as well.

Because it’s Karzoug, there is also a metric ton of treasure for the PCs left behind by Mokmurian – the module says he’s used most of his wealth to fund the army, but again I don’t know why we’re shying away from greed. In this AP above all others, I’d shower the party with gold. It’s not like this wealth allows them to purchase rare artifacts that don’t exist in Sandpoint, and if they want to invest their downtime in Magnimar seeking high-priced items, that sounds like a fun session or two. Indeed, the party spending lavishly creates an interesting moral conundrum for any savvy players, since expressing greed might further fuel Karzoug’s awakening. The only trick is to not give the PCs items that dwarf their other abilities and make future encounters trivial, especially because the goal of the next book is creating powerful relics to take on Karzoug. But again: This Adventure Path is about the sin of G-R-E-E-D… It should not be a treasure-light experience.

Deconstructed Fortress of the Stone Giants

I’m slightly self-conscious about how much I’ve cut or changed in Fortress of the Stone Giants, and may have been prewired to do by the reviews I’d read. That said, retaining Chapters 4 & 5 as written means a long, seemingly endless series of combats with stone giants and a cast of characters to which the PCs have no previous or future connection. What I’ve done instead is provide a significantly more streamlined focus on getting to Jorgenfist and dealing with Mokmurian. There is a large amount of improvisation both the players and GM will need to do once getting there, since the army of giants is too large to take on directly, and for me that’s the fun of this book. To be clear, though: My approach means a lot of “let the players decide” and figuring it out as I go.

Plottr’s visualization shows how relatively straightforward this book becomes, as compared with Book 3:

We’re eyeing the endgame now… Books 5 and 6 are about to get epic in scope. I hope this long and winding journey has been fun for you. Please do drop a comment or email me at jaycms@yahoo.com!

Deconstructing: The Hook Mountain Massacre (Rise of the Runelords Book 3)

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Rise of the Runelords series:

Rise of the Runelords Anniversary Edition by Wayne Reynolds, © 2012, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

Our greed for this project is never-ending! Check out the first Deconstructing for Book 1 for the full explanation of what I’m doing and why. In short, I’m digging into the Rise of the Runelords Adventure Path from Paizo and breaking each book down into what I consider the essential story beats, freeing up room for more character-driven bits and overall simplifying the campaign focus. There are important caveats, which I’ll continue to restate here:

First and foremost, these edits are to my preference for the game that I want to run. What I consider “essential,” you may not, and vice-versa. You would make (or have made) different decisions, which is both natural and part of the fun. Feel free to comment below if you see different opportunities.

Second, get ready to clutch your pearls. If you’ve run or played in Rise of the Runelords, I’m going to be deleting your favorite side quest, or NPC, or completely rewriting villain’s motivations and backstories. When I’m done, it’s not going to resemble the story you know.

Third, there will be rampant spoilers—in fact, once I dive in, these posts are essentially spoilers from start to finish. If you are a player in one of these APs or plan to be, these articles aren’t for you. (If you plan on GMing it, however… welcome!)

Finally, I don’t yet know what game system I’ll be using to run this Adventure Path, but it likely won’t be Pathfinder. Try not to get caught up in how dramatically I’m reducing the possible XP or treasure, or what I’m doing to CR of encounters. For a peek inside my thoughts on systems, you can start here.

Onto Book 3!

Rise of the Runelords 3: The Hook Mountain Massacre

If Book 1 of the Rise of the Runelords Adventure Path is the party versus goblins, and Book 2 is the party versus ghouls, Book 3 is the party versus ogres. I hadn’t realized how each book took on a central, thematic antagonist (at least for the first four books) until diving into this series, but for me that’s as good a structure as any for making sense of each major story beat. As always, the trick with a recurring monster group is to keep the encounters varied and interesting for players. But the devil, as they say, is in the details. Let’s jump into The Hook Mountain Massacre by Nicolas Logue.

The Hook Mountain Massacre by Wayne Reynolds, © 2007, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

Once again, the backstory any GM needs to absorb on this module is dense and complicated. Essentially, the story relies on two allied forces working to conquer an area east of Magnimar: The first is Lucrecia, Xanesha’s lamia sister, who has infiltrated a settlement called Turtleback Ferry and created a gambling den to steer the populace towards greed. The second is a stone giant named Barl Breakbones (great name!) who is helping raise an army to sweep over the region. To do so, Barl brings a local ogre clan to heel, and under his leadership (and with some help from Lucrecia), crushes Fort Rannick, the human-led keepers of wilderness law. With the fort overthrown, who will stop the ogres with their giant leader from waging war?

There are other bits that I’m going to characteristically drop to keep the above (still relatively complex) machinations intact. Once this book is underway, the escalating threats should be enough to follow and keep the party’s attention. As I’ll say again later, the structure of this overall module is terrific.

Chapter 1: In The Hook’s Shadow

Chapter 1 begins in winter, which means that either a few months have passed since the Swallowtail Festival or a little over a year. The module assumes the former, but I’m inclined towards the latter, since I often find APs too crunched on timelines for a satisfying “full adventurer career” arc. Either way, the PCs have downtime and a chance to further any Sandpoint-related plots.

This module takes quite a bit of setup to get into it. Mayor Grobaras contacts the party with a request to meet him personally in Magnimar. Either the party already knows the mayor from their exploits in Book 2 (which makes the reach-out easy to explain) or their reputation as the Heroes of Sandpoint has reached him. Once again, either option is fun, because if the mayor hasn’t met the party, it means the PCs know about Justice Ironbriar and the plot to assassinate Grobaras, but he doesn’t, so the conversation can have some intrigue. This journey is also an opportunity to further any Magnimar-related threads the party began in Book 2.

The mayor explains that Magnimar has lost contact with Fort Rannick, which keeps the peace in the wilderness around Hook Mountain to the east. He’ll offer gold, and as a GM, I’d juice the party’s existing motivations—maybe there’s a hint they see that the mayor doesn’t about Lucrecia, or maybe the local entanglements in Sandpoint are driving them crazy, or maybe there’s an NPC link to one of the PCs in the area. Whatever the case, the mayor suggests traveling to Turtleback Ferry first, the closest settlement to Fort Rannick, to get information. And hey—as the party prepares to go, elven ranger Shalelu Andosana from Book 1 arrives! She wants to join them, as this mission is right up her alley (in the module, her real motivation is a complex relationship with one of the Black Arrows—the force stationed at Fort Rannick. I’m ambivalent about keeping this connection and would only do so if it didn’t distract from the party).

Turtleback Ferry is ~2 weeks away by land and ~1 week by river ferry. The module doesn’t spend a lot of time on the journey, which to me is a shame because it’s the first real “hexploration” type of experience the players could have. Because of my edits below, I’d lean into at least a full session on the journey, which is a chance to bring the world of Golarion to life and explore how Shalelu fits (or not) into the party. I’d also emphasize the difficulty of traveling in winter, which makes it more difficult to run to Magnimar if and when the PCs later get in over their heads.

There’s a detailed gazetteer in the module to flesh out Turtleback Ferry and its populace once the party arrives. For their first visit, the important bits for the story are: 1) sure enough, no one has heard from Fort Rannick in a while, which is uncharacteristic and concerning. They would love the party to investigate and will help however they can. 2) the PCs discover one or more random residents as having Sihedron Rune tattoos they’re trying to hide. What the heck? These are part of Lucrecia’s plans and are given to anyone who frequents her gambling den, called Paradise, a gambling boat in Claybottom Lake. For now, any investigation into the tattoos gives preliminary information but otherwise hits a dead end, and Fort Rannick is the pressing concern.

The rest of this chapter in the module is an involved side quest, especially odd given how much gameplay above there is to get here. On the way to Fort Rannick, the PCs are meant to hear the yowling of a cat. When they go to investigate, they find a firepelt mountain lion named Kipp, which had belonged to one of the Black Arrows, trapped by a hideous ogrekin (the result when ogres rape humans, rejected by both parents, and thus who tend to inbreed) named Rukus Graul and his hounds. A healed Kipp and/or a defeated Rukus will then lead the party to the Graul farm, which is full-on hillbilly horror. There are traps made of saws and spikes, horrible things everywhere, and the hugely obese and grotesque Mammy Graul and the rest of her inbred family. They’ve managed to capture the last three remaining Black Arrows: Jakardros (owner of Kipp), Vale, and Kaven, each of which gets a full two-page spread of backstory and NPC character sheet. All three are willing and able to tell the tale of Fort Rannick’s fall to an ogre horde, and to help retake it.

So, what’s the problem? For me, it’s a handful of things: One, the idea of fighting a whole family of ogrekin on the way to fight a bunch of ogres makes the ogres less interesting and the fights less varied. Second, while hillbilly horror is a distinct genre, the whole farm means roleplaying a bunch of offensive “hick” stereotypes, which is fun for some tables but would make me self-conscious. Third, a lot of details are vile, almost needlessly so, which again detracts from the awfulness of the actual ogres and what’s happened at the fort. Fourth, having not just Shalelu but four active “GM NPCs” is a lot, unless each player wants to pilot one and essentially have two PCs each. Finally, it turns out that Kaven is a traitor! He’s a thrall of Lucrecia, and the one who engineered delays of their patrol so as not to help the fort. To me, this connection between the two plots is forced, and I’m very wary of traitor NPCs because of how mistrusting players are of any future ones. Besides, wouldn’t his fellow Black Arrows realize he’d been magically charmed and constantly slowing them down?

Instead, I’m inclined to substitute the entire Graul farm with a single ogre encounter, as Barl Breakbones has sent out scouts to smash any Black Arrow patrols who had evaded the fort’s takeover. The party can intervene, seeing firsthand how scary ogres are. The three Black Arrows in this scenario are the only survivors of the ogre assault, but too wounded to help with the fort. Many people who have run or played Rise of the Runelords will hate this choice because the Grauls are memorable, but in summary dropping the farm: heightens the Fort Rannick encounters, streamlines the plot, and evades several things I don’t love in the module.

Chapter 2: Retaking Rannick 

The Black Arrows have told their tale, which means the PCs know that a surprisingly organized force of ogres has taken Fort Rannick. The time it would take to send word to Magnimar for help and wait for a response would negate any chances to find more survivors and leave Turtleback Ferry in danger, so it’s up to the PCs to retake the fort.

Armed with the intelligence provided by three insiders, the party has several options for how to infiltrate the fort (or to lure the ogres outside of it).  Jakardros, Vale, and Kaven won’t know how many ogres are there or who’s leading them since they were on patrol outside the fort when it was ransacked and were chased down as they tried to escape. They’ll still provide a detailed map of the 37-room “dungeon,” though, and anything the party can use about how to fight ogres.

One important detail to throw into the mix is that, around the time the PCs begin to make their plans of attack, a heavy rain begins. Barl Breakbones has conscripted a coven of hags to alter the weather and pelt the region with a ceaseless storm. The reasons will become apparent in Chapter 3, but for now it’s something atmospheric (ha!) to any battles at Fort Rannick, and may possibly alter (or enhance) the party’s plans. If there’s a druid or similar in the group, it might also be fun to tip off that PC to the unnatural feeling of the storm as foreshadowing.

The clan of ogres who overthrew Fort Rannick are named the Kreegs, and they have utterly slaughtered the Black Arrows there. From the module: “Dozens of skulls and mangled corpses hang from trees near the fort, with gigantic rusty hooks spitting them like meat awaiting a butcher’s block. The stench of sweat, urine, blood, and ogre-musk befouls the air for hundreds of yards around the fort. Hulking deformed brutes of the Kreeg clan roam the walls of Rannick and lurk within, fatting themselves on human flesh, slaking their thirst on the Black Arrows’ stores of whisky and ale, and dancing their macabre skull-jigs.”

Ew. Ogres are just nasty, man, and a big reason why I don’t want to showcase the ogrekin Grauls is to make the utter savagery and sadism of the Kreegs shocking when the party arrives.

All in all, there are 32 ogres in Fort Rannick, including half a dozen more trained “elite” ogres with distinct personality and tactics. The exact number of foes I’d place in the fort depends a lot on what game system I’m using to run the AP, but as with Thistletop, the ghoul-infested farms, and Foxglove Manner, my goal is to keep the threat level high while not having the encounters feel rote. I won’t go room-by-room here, but the module is full of fun Kreeg nasties and interesting potential set pieces for ogre-fights. Because these APs tend to stuff as many combats as possible into them, there’s also a ghost and shocker lizards, both of which I would drop.

If the PCs find themselves overmatched, the module recommends adding Black Arrow survivors that break free of their captivity and join the fight. If the party can do it alone, though, I also like the idea that the Kreegs were merciless and complete in their conquest, leaving only the scraps of their foes behind.

Surprisingly, Lucrecia has made Fort Rannick her home after sinking her gambling boat, Paradise, after the PCs visited Turtleback Ferry (this timing is slightly different than what’s in the module but makes more sense to me). I like the idea of her being in human form and incongruously meeting the party after they’ve defeated the Kreegs, offering them a drink and to chat. There she’ll reveal some of the larger plot across the AP and tell the PCs that they’ve made a powerful enemy of Mokmurian, who leads the stone giants in a place called Jorgenfist, by killing the ogres, so they should join his army or face his wrath. When either a) they refuse, b) they reveal that they killed her sister Xanesha, or c) Lucrecia says her name, the fight will be on, and she’ll reveal her true lamia form. She’ll also likely flee if she’s losing, and can appear later at Barl’s side in Hook Mountain.

I truly like the next half of the module, which allows the party to pursue any number of goals in whatever order they want. Eventually, the party will need to:

  1. Reestablish Fort Rannick. The party has saved three Black Arrows, all of whom need to heal, and perhaps there were some survivors within the fort. Regardless, the fort is now critically undermanned and can’t hold back the wild forces that would threaten Varisia. If asked, Mayor Grobaras in Magnimar will send a force, but it will take weeks to muster and travel during winter. Do the party act as guardians themselves? Conscript a force from Turtleback Ferry? Does Shalelu step up as leader (at some point, her time with the party will need to end)? To me, this is an interesting story beat that the module provides some details for a GM to anticipate, but is largely an open problem to solve. (As a sidenote, the rebuilding of Fort Rannick by folk conscripted from Turtleback Ferry sounds like a fun homebrewed adventure to run for a table when regular attendees can’t make game night!)
  2. Return to Turtleback Ferry to investigate those Sihedron Runes (Chapter 3).
  3. Take the fight to Barl Breakbones in Hook Mountain (Chapter 5).

There is a fourth option, in Chapter 4, but as I detail below, I’m dropping this section. Still, I love that the module doesn’t presuppose an order, which allows PCs to focus on whatever they see as most urgent. I also like the idea of making the first task they tackle meaningfully easier and the third task meaningfully more difficult, which adds weight to the players’ choices and causes the world to feel more alive.

Chapter 3: Down Comes the Rain

Whenever the party decides to return to Turtleback Ferry after retaking Fort Rannick, their journey back is interrupted by a villager who has braved the storm to find them. The dam at Skull’s Crossing has broken, he says, and the town is flooding! The village needs their help, and quickly!

The PCs find Turtleback Ferry mid-flood and must swing into action to help the populace evacuate. Most distressingly, the children from the local schoolhouse are trying to brave the floodwaters while a giant nightbelly boa, a river predator, rises from the water to attack. Immediately after this problem is solved, however, it becomes clear that the local legend—Black Magga (an unfortunate name in today’s world)—has been carried into the town by the flood. Black Magga is an enormous Elasmosaurus-like creature, and it’s been wounded by the journey from the dam to town. Even still, it’s meant to be a kaiju-like figure far outside the party’s capabilities, which is always a fun challenge. Black Magga will utterly destroy the chapel if left unchecked, killing everyone who took shelter there, and then continue its rampage. If the party can manage to distract and hurt it, the creature will retreat into the depths of Claybottom Lake.

Cheers erupt from the surviving townsfolk once Black Magga retreats and, as everyone takes stock, it appears the floodwaters are receding somewhat. The locals postulate that the dam at Skull’s Crossing must not have fully broken, then. Will these mighty heroes go upriver and see, hopefully securing the ancient Thassilonian structure? Oh, and beware: A tribe of trolls called the Skulltakers call Skull’s Crossing their home, which is why residents don’t go there.

The colossal dam was built by Karzoug, and features lots of skull motifs (because: villain!). No one in Turtleback Ferry understands how its complex mechanisms work, only that they have done so for generations (or, little do they understand, ten-thousand years… the timescale of Golarion is bonkers). Kreeg ogres were sent by Barl Breakbones to destroy the dam and flood the town, the disaster made worse by the hags’ unnatural storm. Unfortunately for them, they encountered the trolls, and a battle has been raging between the two sides for days. The dam is now partially destroyed, and will soon fall completely without the party’s aid. Thus begins a complex-but-fun set piece, in which the PCs’ goal is to keep the dam intact, yet in order to do so they have to defeat the forces battling atop and throughout the structure, and both forces hate each other and the PCs equally.

I don’t love the floodgate control mechanism inside the dam, which is two magical circles that imprison powerful pit fiends. In the module, the circles drain energy from the ancient devils, and this energy, among others things, opens the flood gates when needed. One of the pit fiends has finally perished from the strain of the recent storms, and it’s up to the party to bargain with the remaining devil and, ultimately, for a party member to step into the open circle, have his or her life energy drained to raise the floodgates and thus save the day. What I don’t like about this situation is: 1) the mechanism has very little to do with greed, which is Karzoug’s thing and thus it’s a missed opportunity to showcase the Runelord’s “thing,” 2) it just feels random and disconnected from anything else in the AP, other than it being something the Runelord made long ago, and 3) a PC can open the floodgates this one time, but what’s the long-term solution? With one of the devils gone and the other near death, it feels inevitable that Turtleback Ferry is doomed to a failing dam, which doesn’t match a heroic fantasy adventure.

Instead, I’m inclined to forget the whole “powered by imprisoned devils” thing and simply make the place an architectural marvel whose technology has been lost to the ages. When the PCs finally clear the location of ogres and trolls, they now face some sort of hazard involving a failing dam and must come up with a creative way to repair something they don’t understand. Doing so, it seems to me, showcases any scholarly/brilliant PCs and strong/athletic ones alike, for surely any solution will require both brains and brawn. It’s exactly the sort of situation I can picture in a superheroic comic book, which is pretty much what the PCs are at this point. There’s still no tie to greed as a sin, but maybe inspiration will strike me between now and when I run this part of the AP.

Once the disaster has been averted, the PCs are welcome to come and go from Turtleback Ferry as heroes. Given time, they can finally pursue the lead of the Sihedron Rune tattoos, which Lucrecia made the exclusive entry ticket to her gambling barge the Paradise. Some investigation reveals that the barge sank in the days the PCs were retaking Fort Rannick, drowning all aboard. Lucrecia, it seems, worried the presence of the PCs would reveal her plot to harvest souls for Karzoug, so she sank the boat and relocated to the fort, where she (wrongly) assumed she would be safe. Again, the above isn’t the exact timing spelled out in the module, but makes more sense to me.

Chapter 4: The Haunted Heart

In the module as written, Fort Rannick’s commander mysteriously disappeared before the ogre raid. I haven’t mentioned it until now because the mystery of his disappearance is due to an odd and complicated reason: Essentially, Commander Lamatar Bayden was the secret lover of a nymph named Myriana, and Lucrecia used this information (gained from a charmed Kaven) to attack her home and murder her. Bayden then went mad after finding her remains, and Lucrecia handed him over to the coven of hags in Barl’s service. Then, Myriana’s spirit rose in anguish, haunting the woods in which she resided. See what I mean by complicated? Chapter 4, then, is a manhunt for Commander Bayden, which leads them into the haunted Shimmerglens (which, oddly, is quite a long distance from Fort Rannick… how was the commander keeping his relationship a secret?), where they discover the vengeful nymph-spirit and then are sent by her to find his remains. With his remains, she can somehow reincarnate the commander, even though it violates the Resurrection spell description because, well, they just really loved each other.

It’s… a lot, and exactly the sort of complexity I’m trying to avoid. Haunted forests and lovelorn nymph-spirits are cool, but it all feels out of place here. Why can’t the fort have been simply overrun by an organized force of ogres, more organized than they’ve been thanks to a stone giant leader intent on war? It’s a much simpler throughline, and one that should be easy for players to follow. As a result, I’m dropping this entire chapter.

Instead, as I outlined at the end of Chapter 2, the third goal for the PCs after retaking Fort Rannick is how to reestablish the fort as a shield against the wilds for Turtleback Ferry and the rest of eastern Varisia. To me, this is an interesting puzzle to solve where there is no one best solution and, meaningfully, is a likely offramp for Shalelu with the party.

Chapter 5: Harrowing the Hook

At some point after defeating the forces at Fort Rannick, it’s time for the heroes to take the fight to Barl Breakbones and his remaining Kreeg ogres, all of whom reside in Hook Mountain, about fifteen miles northwest of Turtleback Ferry and due west from Skull’s Crossing. With it comes some wilderness survival, since reaching the foot of the mountain is relatively straightforward, but scaling the towering mountain amidst a storm (which at some point changes from heavy rain to sleet, and then to snow) is more harrowing. How much time I spend on the journey would vary by table, but at the very least it’s an opportunity for skill challenges, hazards, and maybe a non-ogre monster encounter with something like harpies. This AP has an odd amount of mountain-scaling in the future, though, so I would temper my approach here.

Half a mile from the 10,000-foot-high peak is a cave belching black smoke, entrance to the Kreeg clanhold. The ogre domain is a dungeon of nine large rooms (after all, it’s the home of ogres and giants), and every encounter here should be daunting and worth a combat. I would slightly change the contents of the clanhold, dropping: 1) the scores of ogre slaves, which don’t fit how I see ogre society, 2) the reason for the slaves, which is manufacturing weapons for the giant army, since I can’t fathom that a primitive, natural ogre cave is well-suited for a giant’s blacksmith and armory, and would require a supply chain to Mokmurian’s faraway forces that doesn’t make sense, and 3) Commander Brayton, now turned into a frost wight by the hags.

The other details I would keep: There are the few remaining Kreeg ogres (perhaps fled from Fort Rannick, or held back by Barl to protect the clanhold), there’s a hill giant, the coven of hags, and, finally, the stone giant Barl Breakbones and his stone giant bodyguard. The bodyguard is oddly generic and without a name, so I would spend some time making him worthy of bodyguard status—Barl is a spellcaster, but this bodyguard should be the stone giants’ answer to Darth Maul, and maybe even an ettin, since I cut one in the module earlier. Finally, I think there’s a decent chance Lucrecia has fled here, and she should surprise the party nastily if so.

If the party rushed to Hook Mountain after retaking the fort, I’ll reward them by making the forces here disorganized and flat-footed, without Barl even knowing that Fort Rannick had fallen. If not, then it’s a more difficult set of encounters, including things like ogres dropping rocks on the party’s heads as they approach the caves and taking every advantage of their clanhold’s layout. Either way, the Barl-boss-battle (BBB!) should take place in what Barl calls his throne room.

I truly never realized how commonplace the “note to the mini-boss from the next boss” trope was in Adventure Paths, but when the PCs defeat Barl there’s meant to be a note from Barl’s stone giant boss Mokmurian (written on mammoth hide, no less!), telling him of a plan to strike Sandpoint and the name of his stronghold: Jorgenfist. At this point, I can’t drop yet another note into an ogre cave, which is why I seeded Mokmurian and Jorgenfist’s names in the first Lucrecia fight. Unlike what the AP intends, I will very likely have dropped Karzoug’s name already, so I think a little monologuing should allow the link between Barl and the Runelord to be clear. I’d also play up Barl’s greed and make the former-Kreeg throne room piled high with the spoils from Fort Rannick and other battles, a mini dragon’s horde. If somehow the PCs don’t yet learn Mokmurian’s name or the plot against Sandpoint, the story will proceed anyway just fine.

Once the Chapters 3-5 have been settled, the PCs can use the treasure from the throne room to help rebuild Turtleback Ferry and Fort Rannick, plus gain some sweet items for themselves. Or maybe they’ll take it back to further some plot in Sandpoint or Magnimar. The point should be that they’re rich, thanks to defeating the forces of greed. How will they use their wealth?

It’s interesting to reflect on the end of the module across the various ways the party might prioritize their three goals at the end of Chapter 2. If the party ends here, there’s the BBB and a pile of treasure, a pretty natural end to an adventure arc. If the party ends with the rebuilding of Fort Rannick, the adventure concludes with some sort of montage, downtime, and a hopeful note, probably with some sort of emotional goodbye with Shalelu. If the party ends at Skull’s Crossing, the breaking dam is the climax and the book ends with a triumphant return to a surviving Turtleback Ferry. Truly, any order across those three goals sounds great to me.

However the action ends, there will be PC-driven Turtleback Ferry plots to wrap up. Once the party feels good about the region’s ongoing security (very likely thanks to Grobaras sending help), they can return to Magnimar and report everything to the mayor. Hopefully there are story beats and people the PCs care about in Sandpoint, pulling them back to the town for Book 4.

Deconstructed The Hook Mountain Massacre

Despite changing a ton of the module as written and dropping major sections, I like The Hook Mountain Massacre a lot. A chance to do some wilderness trekking is great. Tackling ogres and retaking a fort is cool. Giving the PCs a chance to handle story beats in any order is refreshing. Fighting ogres and trolls who are fighting each other atop a crumbling, ancient dam is epic. Quickly finding Xanesha’s sister (versus letting this thread dangle) is satisfying. And the main bad guy, Barl Breakbones, is not only scary but a natural setup for the next book. Above all, Book 3 widens the party’s perspective, making them, hopefully, see themselves as guardians of the entire region. Certainly, after these events their reputation will be growing across Varisia!

Using Plottr for visualization, here is where I landed across this book. It’s an interesting story map, and showcases how much there are two stories circling one another.

And with that, we’re halfway through the first Paizo Adventure Path set in Golarion! What might the second half of this journey entail?

As always, please drop a comment or email me at jaycms@yahoo.com!

Deconstructing: The Skinsaw Murders (Rise of the Runelords Book 2)

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Rise of the Runelords series:

Rise of the Runelords Anniversary Edition by Wayne Reynolds, © 2012, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

If you missed the first part of this series, what are you doing here you silly goose? Check out my post on Book 1 from yesterday for the full explanation of what I’m doing and why. In short, I’m digging into the Rise of the Runelords Adventure Path from Paizo and breaking each book down into what I consider the essential story beats, freeing up room for more character-driven bits and overall simplifying the campaign focus. There are several important caveats, which I’ll restate here:

First and foremost, these edits are to my preference for the game that I want to run. What I consider “essential,” you may not, and vice-versa. You would make (or have made) different decisions, which is both natural and part of the fun. Feel free to comment below if you see different opportunities.

Second, get ready to clutch your pearls. If you’ve run or played in Rise of the Runelords, I’m going to be deleting your favorite side quest, or NPC, or completely rewriting villain’s motivations and backstories. When I’m done, it’s not going to resemble the story you know.

Third, there will be rampant spoilers—in fact, once I dive in, these posts are essentially spoilers from start to finish. If you are a player in one of these APs or plan to be, these articles aren’t for you. (If you plan on GMing it, however… welcome!)

Finally, I don’t yet know what game system I’ll be using to run this Adventure Path, but it likely won’t be Pathfinder. Try not to get caught up in how dramatically I’m reducing the possible XP or treasure, or what I’m doing to CR of encounters. For a peek inside my thoughts on systems, you can start here.

With the preamble out of the way, let’s jump into Book 2!

Rise of the Runelords 2: The Skinsaw Murders

The Skinsaw Murders by Wayne Reynolds, © 2007, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

In Book 1 of the Rise of the Runelords Adventure Path, we saw the party of heroes thwart a goblin raid in Sandpoint at the annual Swallowtail Festival, become local celebrities (with various character-specific plots weaving them into the community). Then, while the Sheriff was out of town, they became aware that the goblins did not retreat into the hinterlands as assumed, but instead had gathered in the local glassworks. When the party cleaned out Sandpoint Glassworks, they discovered that multiple goblin tribes were being orchestrated by someone named Nualia, and that their base of operations was nearby Thistletop. Our heroes thus traveled to Thistletop, where they defeated not only the goblin warchief but Nualia herself. In so doing, they discovered ancient Thassilonian ruins that date thousands of years back to the Runelord of Greed, Karzoug (though they may not realize this connection yet). The party returned to town having quelled a regionwide threat, and their reputation as the Heroes of Sandpoint only deepened.

Book 2, The Skinsaw Murders written by Richard Pett, kicks off some time after these events, which should give the PCs plenty of time for downtime and to further whatever character-specific plots tie them into the town. Meanwhile, an NPC from Book 1 is up to no good. From the module: “In the previous chapter, the PCs rescued Aldern Foxglove from a band of goblins and then accompanied him on a boar hunt—his way of repaying the PCs for saving his life. Although he hid his desperation well, Aldern was deep in debt to the Brothers of the Seven” (who? see below) “at the time. When the PCs rescued him, he became obsessed with one of them, seeing in this PC a misplaced opportunity for his own redemption. Aldern’s obsession stems from one of three sins (GM choice): lust, envy, or wrath.”

I’ll be honest: The module opens with a three-page spread of backstory that is fantastically complex that I’ll largely ignore in favor of simpler motives. But I’m keeping the central spine: Foxglove has tried to reclaim his family’s abandoned haunted mansion outside of Sandpoint, and did so with the help of a corrupt organization, the Brothers of the Seven (aka the Skinsaw Cult), who are led by a follower of Karzoug, a long-lived lamia named Xanesha. The lamia matriarch has played on all of Foxglove’s weaknesses, and by the time Book 2 opens he is succumbing to ghoul fever and is utterly her thrall. Even that backstory is pretty complex, but works well enough for what happens throughout this book without massively rewriting the story.

Chapter 1: Murder Most Foul

The new adventure begins with Sheriff Hemlock approaching the PCs, telling them of a string of murders in Sandpoint. He’s been keeping them quiet because of the Chopper murder spree (part of the Late Unpleasantness that plagued Sandpoint five years ago and that the PCs will have heard about from their dealings in town in Book 1). He wants them to investigate the crimes before the same sort of hysteria overtakes the town. Great! A straightforward setup with clear motivations. Love it.

The sheriff then hands the PC who Foxglove is obsessed with a scrap of paper, with a creepy message written in blood just to them—a note that had been pinned to the latest victim. What could it mean? We have ourselves an old-fashioned murder mystery! If the PCs decline to help, the murders only mount and get more personal, so eventually they’re drawn into the investigation.

The sheriff promises to help as needed but will be focused on keeping the town peace. He deputizes the heroes (classic!) and gives them a list of all the leads he currently has, including directing them to the latest crime scene at the Sandpoint Lumber Mill. It’s hard to imagine any group of players not beginning with the crime scene, where they find a set of muddy footprints, two bodies (the mill’s operator Benny Harker and Katrine Vinder, the other daughter of Ven Vinder from Book 1), a bloody axe, and the lingering stench of decay (left by Foxglove’s undead body).

I should note that the descriptions in the module are truly horrific, and worthy of some content warnings with players in Session 0 of the AP. How much to play into the horror is, I suppose, a table decision, but I don’t see how you can avoid some of the awfulness, particularly the fact that Harker’s body has been carved with a seven-pointed star, the same symbol worn by Nualia from Book 1. The PCs can a) thoroughly investigate the scene for clues, b) go back to the jail and question Ibor Thorn, Harker’s partner and the one who discovered the bodies, c) question the only suspect, Ven Vinder, in another cell, and d) investigate the seven-pointed star, an ancient Thassilonian symbol, via experts like Brodert Quink in town. Doing so can reveal:

  • Something undead crawled from the nearby marsh through the upper floor of the mill. One of the victims hit it with the axe before dying.
  • Harker was sacrificed in some sort of magical ritual whereas Katrine died by being pushed through the log splitter (gross).
  • Harker was embezzling money from the mill, cooking its books. He and Katrine were having an affair. The more they investigate Benny Harker, the less respectable he seems. He was, essentially, a greedy man.
  • Ven is innocent, but there’s a great chance to carry over whatever interpersonal tangles he might have with the PCs from Book 1.
  • A good lore dump about ancient Thassilon, including the origins of the seven-pointed star, called a Sihedron Rune, and its ties to the seven virtues / sins.

Of course, these two deaths were only the latest murders. Sheriff Hemlock can point the PCs to a raving man named Grayst Sevilla and the three bodies they found him with from two days prior. The bodies are all ritually sacrificed as Harker’s, with the same Sihedron Rune carved into them. Grayst is a tough one to interrogate because of his madness, but was made to watch the rituals (which broke his mind) and can reveal a) it was a ghoul calling himself the Skinsaw Man, and b) he’s targeting greedy souls. Grayst is also succumbing to ghoul fever, which provides a moral quandary to the party about what to do with him.

In the module, Grayst is the “prize” of Chapter 2, but I’d push it up here for reasons I’ll explain below. Otherwise, Chapter 1 to my eye is a good—albeit gross—start to a murder mystery and straightforward to run.

Chapter 2: The Thing in the Attic 

Everything about this chapter except Grayst, to me, feels unnecessary. We have a large sanatorium in a remote dale outside of Sandpoint, with a long, complicated backstory that has nothing to do with the central plot. Instead, it involves a desperate crackpot sadist and a rogue necromancer working together, and the PCs find themselves needing to deal with both just to question Grayst. I’m loathe to include something like a sanatorium in an adventure in the best of times, but I’m certainly not excited about creating something sinister and, ultimately, cliché. At best, this whole set of story beats is uncomfortable for the players. At worst, they require their own content warnings and feel like a parody of mental illness all throughout the complex. The module creates a red herring in the necromancer, someone who has nothing to do with the murders but seems to, which I find annoying. Finally, what are the PCs supposed to do with the poor people in the sanatorium once they’ve eliminated both its operator and financial sponsor? Nope, don’t like it.

There are some fun—and creepy!—details about Grayst’s feverish mutterings, especially towards the PC that Foxglove has targeted with his attention. I’d keep these bits and discard the rest, and simply place Grayst in a cell alongside Ven in Chapter 1.  

Chapter 3: Walking Scarecrows

As the PCs grapple with the various clues and murders, Sheriff Hemlock again comes calling. A farmer—with the hysterical name of Maester Grump—is the lone survivor of a group that had been trying to combat something menacing the various farmsteads surrounding Sandpoint. Why the sheriff sent him to the PCs becomes obvious as he tells his tale: Farms are being attacked by “walking scarecrows” which, as he details his account, are likely ghouls. Grump can pinpoint the source of the problems as originally stemming from the old Hambley place. The PCs can take some of Hemlock’s guards with them if they want to enlist aid or go on their lonesome to check out what’s happening.

Hambley’s farm and family, it turns out, were the first victims of Foxglove as the Skinsaw Man, his first exploits as a full undead monster. He turned the Hambleys just as he did Grayst, but because more time has passed, they’re all ghouls eating and turning the other farming families. Over three dozen farmsteads sit to the southeast of Sandpoint (equidistant from the town to Foxglove Manor, which is southwest along the coast), and as the party questions locals, the news of the walking scarecrows and its epicenter at Hambley farm becomes clear.

Then, as they near Hambley’s, the PCs discover a mix of corpses and newly-turned ghouls hanging as scarecrows among the fields. It’s all pretty horrific again, so tread cautiously. That said, there’s an opportunity to make very atmospheric and creepy discoveries of the ghoul plague infesting the farmlands, with as many undead encounters as feels right for the players in the system I’m running.

Farmer Hambley’s body is ritually sacrificed and sits decaying in the farmhouse kitchen, with another Sihedron Rune and another note pinned to the body for the targeted PC. The rest of his family are ghouls, and should attack the PCs in the scariest way possible. Except for Foxglove, this chapter is the big “fight ghouls” chapter, which I’d make as long or short as suits the appetite (heh… see what I did there?) of my players.

The big link the module makes between the Skinsaw murders and Foxglove happens when the PCs kill a ghoul who was both a Hambley farmer and once caretaker of Foxglove Manor. I find this link forced, so I would instead drop some clues—either in the notes or some physical clue left by Aldern Foxglove—that makes the party highly suspicious that he has some sort of link here. As they look for him in town, no one has seen the nobleman since shortly after the boar hunt from Book 1. As a result, the PCs learn of Foxglove Manor’s existence and go to investigate.

If the PCs aren’t making the link or pursue some lengthy side quest, more murders can occur. I wouldn’t overdue it here – I think that I’d make the next Skinsaw Murder an NPC that can qualify as “greedy” that the PCs like, then drop another highly-personal note that means they can’t ignore Foxglove.

The module also suggests the idea of dropping a number of ghoul “time bombs” into Sandpoint that Foxglove has created, then possibly a “Night of the Ghouls” where they all attack. I find that these ideas would likely draw out the adventure significantly, and make too-repetitive ghoul combats. Once the PCs have handled the farmstead problem and made the definitive connection to Foxglove (while also being unable to find him in town), I’d point them at Foxglove Manor and keep the story moving.

Chapter 4: Misgivings

I suspect the author gave Foxglove Manor the nickname “the Misgivings” to avoid spoiling anything with the chapter titles, but it’s a nice local flavor anyway. The origin of the nickname and other details about the house plagued by misfortune can get puzzled out by the PCs if they do any research before heading there. When they travel, the path to Foxglove Manor is three miles from Sandpoint southwest along the Varisian coast. The party reaches the location to find a decaying mansion hanging off a cliff “as if the entire house were poised for a suicide leap.” The description of the place’s exterior and interior are fun and help enhance the horror vibes running throughout Book 2.

Remember that three-page convoluted backstory I mentioned opening the module? Welp, the intent is for Foxglove Manor to be haunted by one of Aldern’s relatives, Vorel Foxglove, who tried to become a lich and was interrupted by his wife, and thus the house itself became his phylactery. Vorel still haunts the manor today. Also, there’s a supernatural fungus in the basement, keeping it all in place. Oh, and there are six other deaths within the house that have led to hauntings. Frankly, it’s all the kind of stuff I’m eager to cut, and exactly the kind of randomness that, in my experience, leads players to forget why they’re doing what they’re doing it in APs. I’m fine with Foxglove Manor being a haunted mansion to add varied threats, but I’m equally fine just making it a creepy place in which Foxglove and his growing army of ghouls reside. Toggling it between the two doesn’t change the central plot, so either enjoy the ghosts and haunts or massively shorten the chapter – GM’s call. Either way, I like the module’s suggestion that spending the night in Foxglove Manor is a no-no, and any PC who does so is likely plagued by damaging nightmares and then suffers some sort of condition.

I’m not going to go through the Manor’s 37-room dungeon, complete with animated stuffed manticores, phantom fires, a dire bat, semi-liches, and many various haunts that make PCs a) roleplay a grieving wife, b) dance to death, and c) jump from the roof. Suffice it to say, even if I kept the house as haunted, I would remove several encounters and backstory elements to the haunting. As it is, the parts I’ll keep are the “natural” hazards like collapsing floors, sentient mold, and rat swarms, plus maybe a haunt or two. I’ll drop the whole conceit of the corrupted basement and the complex tragedies that led to hauntings. Instead, I’ll keep the house levels of the map as inspiration, add natural hazards, and seed it with Aldern Foxglove and his ghoulish horde.

Eventually, of course, must come the showdown with Foxglove. There are several details I’m dropping in this encounter as written, namely the supernatural fungus fueling the haunts and Aldern switching between his own personality and Vorel’s. Instead, I’d play up the changes in the NPC they got to know in Book 1, now utterly corrupted by his ghoulishness and his patron Xanesha. There will be lots of monologuing on his obsession with the chosen PC (high creepy factor), why he performed his various murders—harvesting greedy souls for Xanesha—and his need to pay off debts to the Brothers of the Seven in Magnimar. In the module there’s a note from Xanesha that details a bit of this, but since the “find the villain’s notes” plot device was used with Nualia (and will be used again and again and again), I’d insert as much as I could into Foxglove’s rantings during the battle as possible and reduce reliance on the note-trope.

Chapter 5: Chasing the Skinsaw

There’s finally a break for the PCs between Chapters 4 & 5. Here they can tell the sheriff and mayor about what they’ve uncovered, get some well-earned downtime, and further any in-town side plots that are still active (or create some new ones if not!). Town officials will point out that, if they want to get to the bottom of this nonsense, it sounds like they should go to Magnimar to find out who this Xanesha person is and to dissuade the Brothers of the Seven from further targeting Sandpoint. And didn’t Foxglove have a townhouse in Magnimar? As motivations go, it’s a little anemic, and I can see some parties not taking the bait. If that happens, Xanesha can send a new operative to pick up where Foxglove left off. Doing so extends the length of the AP, but it will be a clear signal that this threat won’t end until someone goes to Magnimar to deal with it.

The sheriff and mayor likely suggest the PCs begin at Foxglove’s house in Magnimar. But first, it’s a chance to show off what is the party’s first major metropolis. Magnimar is the City of Monuments, and there is a detailed gazetteer available within the module, plus a Paizo supplement to go even deeper. The trick is to not get too distracted with the city and its trappings, and to keep the party somewhat focused. To me, though, I’d want to spend at least a session or two “showing off” Magnimar and bringing the city to life. If there’s an opportunity to foreshadow something about Justice Ironbriar (leader of the Skinsaw Cult founded by the lamia Xanesha and a later encounter) or the mayor, all the better. I’d also want to establish some sort of encounter with the local authorities to see whether the party is going work with them or against them while in the city. Finally, if the party somehow got entangled with the Sczarni in Book 1, there’s an opportunity for a payoff here.

At Foxglove’s townhouse, Xanesha has laid a trap. She likely knows that Aldern has failed, and figures that whoever killed him will come here. Xanesha and Justice Ironbriar have planted two faceless stalkers here. They’re aberrant shapeshifters, so when the party arrives, they find… Aldern and one of the victims?! It’s a fun idea, and I’m inclined to keep it, both for the initial confusion and the realization that the people sponsoring Foxglove have some scary things in their arsenal. Will others they encounter in Magnimar also be shapeshifters? It’s a dangerous ripcord to pull as a GM (in general, Paizo uses faceless stalkers a lot in APs), but here I think it’s fun.

Searching the townhouse brings riches and (and this is me altering what’s in the module) the written agreement between the Brothers of the Seven and Aldern Foxglove to fund restoration of his birthright of Foxglove Manor. Though the module doesn’t say it explicitly, I’d also sprinkle in a Sihedron Rune or two into the letters, and maybe a hint that Xanesha actually runs the Brothers through powerful proxies. Importantly, there will also be a clue that the Brothers, also called the Skinsaw Cult, gathers at the Seven’s Sawmill in Magnimar.

Chapter 6: The Seven’s Sawmill

This chapter begins with an explanation of Norgorber, god of murder, secrets, greed, and poison, and his various cults across Magnimar. One of those cults is the Brothers of the Seven, aka the Skinsaw Cult. I’m embarrassed to say that I didn’t really make the connection between the Skinsaw Cult and a Golarion god. Anyway, Norgorber worship is bad news, and the Skinsaw Cult is particularly vile.

The cult’s base of operations is the Seven’s Sawmill (which feels like sort of an obvious name for a secret cult’s headquarters, doesn’t it?), a lumber mill along the shores of Kyver’s Islet in Magnimar. I’m surprised and impressed by the constraint here – the Seven’s Sawmill isn’t a sprawling dungeon, but rather a fairly contained 30’x45’ building with multiple floors. As with the Glassworks and Thistletop from Book 1, the PCs must decide when and how they want to approach and/or infiltrate the mill.  

Pathfinder is a highly tactical combat simulator of a system, so here the danger if you’re playing either edition of the gameis how easy it is to trigger multiple rooms and pile on encounters with the cultists. I’ll be using a more “theater of the mind” system to run it, so for me it’s about making the sawmill include 1-3 cool set piece battles as the party comes face to face with Norgorber-worshipping cultists. In the module the cultists are in full, dramatic attire, but I find that hard to believe. For me, the fun here is that the place initially looks like a regular log mill (since it is an operational mill) with laborers who may or may not be cultists. Deeper into the offices are the sinister bad guys, not in dramatic red-and-gold robes but certainly ready to spring into action with weapons and magic.

The mini-boss of the sawmill is Justice Ironbriar, an elven Magnimar judge who moonlights as the operational head of the Skinsaw Cult. If he was foreshadowed in the initial exploration of Magnimar, that will make this revelation even more surprising. I do think since Ironbriar is in the central offices, he’ll have time to don his “reaper mask” and look dramatic and scary as he confronts the PCs in the final sawmill showdown.

If the PCs manage to defeat Ironbriar without killing him, it’s clear that he’s been charmed by Xanesha and her thrall. If they somehow manage to break this spell, he can provide loads of information about her location and defenses in Magnimar. If not, or if the PCs kill him, I wonder if he might have some journals lying around? He does! My goodness, this is getting silly. Here, though, it makes some sense, since Ironbriar is a judge and thus prone to documentation. Not only does his office contain trophies from his various victims, but meticulous notes about the cult. Here the GM can answer any lingering questions about Foxglove and his murders on behalf of the Brothers, and it’s clear that a) Xanesha is the force behind the cult, and b) she resides atop a decrepit tower in Magnimar, called the Shadow Clock.

This chapter ends with various implications for the revelations that one of the city’s justices has led a murder cult. It’s up to the PCs how quiet or loud they want to be about exposing the Brothers of the Seven. If it’s a more lawful group that works with the local authorities, they’ll get an audience with Magnimar’s mayor and the City Watch’s help in vanquishing Xanesha. If not, they’ll need to keep a low profile so they don’t get implicated for the death of a judge. Either option is fun.

Chapter 7: Shadows of Time

Xanesha is one of two lamia sisters who are servants of the Runelord Karzoug, sent to harvest the souls of greed to help revive their lord. Whereas Lucrecia went to central Varisia, Xanesha began in the city of Magnimar with the Brothers of the Seven as her agents. She ultimately plots to harvest the soul of the city’s greedy mayor, and will continue to move towards broader and grander efforts until the PCs deal with her.

Sort of surprisingly, Xanesha has settled in the slums of Magnimar called Underbridge, which makes sense from a “keeping a low profile” standpoint but not in a “finding greedy souls” one. But the Shadow Clock is a cool, atmospheric location, a sagging limestone clock tower beneath an enormous iron bridge, a remnant of one of Magnimar’s many failed attempts to bring lawfulness to Underbridge. It’s obviously considered haunted by the locals and rumors about as to what’s taken residence there, and it’s here the PCs travel to confront Xanesha.

Once again, I’m surprised and impressed that the Shadow Clock isn’t a sprawling dungeon, but instead a 9-story tower with essentially a single room on each level, a staircase running along its perimeter. Xanesha has placed guardians for the PCs (and to prevent visitors), including a flesh golem (called “the Scarecrow,” which I find an odd choice given Chapter 3 of this book, so I’d likely reflavor it), more faceless stalkers (which are wasted here because of lack of subterfuge or surprise, so I’d likely replace these with different weird/gross thralls, or maybe ghouls) who drop one of the clock tower’s four bells down upon the PCs’ heads (fun hazard!), and, at the top of the tower, the lamia Xanesha.

Xanesha is a creature of subtlety and deception, so she watches the PCs take on her minions to gauge their abilities and eventually strikes from the shadows. She has illusory magic at her disposal, so the trick to this combat is to take the party by surprise and—at least in my imagination—have her true lamia form revealed mid-combat. It’s a tough sort of combat to pull off as a GM, but the payoff is a cool-ass boss battle.

Of course, Xanesha’s lair has loads of treasure (offerings from her various thralls, and to emphasize the sin of greed) and… you guessed it… a letter! This missive is from her sister, alerting the PCs to Lucrecia’s existence and their shared goal of raising their “lord” (who is Karzoug, and who I would have already revealed, especially if there are any Thassilonian scholars in the party to heighten the stakes). I am really starting to groan at this plot device, but Xanesha does indeed have a rookery from which she’s been sending letters all over the region, including to Foxglove, Ironbriar, and the rest of the Skinsaw Cult, so I guess it works here. There’s also plenty of evidence about her plan to harvest the mayor’s soul, so if the PCs have made a connection with Mayor Grobaras of Magnimar, they can be even bigger heroes and showered with gold for their efforts.

And that’s that. With Xanesha defeated and the Brothers of the Seven / Skinsaw Cult’s funding and leader gone, the PCs can return to Sandpoint. Either they’re also heroes of Magnimar or they have operated in the shadows, but either way they can’t seem to find any more information on Thassilon, Lucrecia, or Karzoug for now. They can finish up any Magnimar- or Sandpoint-based side plots and get some downtime, knowing the threat to the region is still very real.

Deconstructed The Skinsaw Murders

Once again using Plottr for visualization, here is where I landed on Book 2:

What begins as a murder investigation, then, turns into a tragic ghoul plague with a notable NPC from Book 1, controlled by a sinister murder cult from nearby Magnimar. The cult’s puppet master is one of several creatures sent into Varisia by Runelord Karzoug’s growing consciousness, to inscribe Sihedron Runes onto the flesh of greedy souls, their deaths fueling his return. Little does the party know that they will come to face all of these lieutenants, and eventually the Runelord himself.

I’m surprised and impressed with how much of The Skinsaw Murders I retained. I dropped Chapter 2 in its entirety, simplified Foxglove Manor, dropped some cumbersome backstory, and changed a few encounters. Otherwise, it’s pretty much the same, and should be an engrossing (and gross!) horror-themed few months for a gaming table. The next couple of books are unlikely to be as recognizable, so strap in!

I hope this long and winding journey continues to be fun for you. Please do drop a comment or email me at jaycms@yahoo.com!

Deconstructing: Burnt Offerings (Rise of the Runelords Book 1)

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Rise of the Runelords series:

Rise of the Runelords Anniversary Edition by Wayne Reynolds, © 2012, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

I’ve started collecting the Paizo Adventure Paths in earnest, and fully plan on running as many as I can before I shed this mortal coil. When I do so, I’ll be running them in a lighter heroic system (for my initial thoughts here, check out this post), and—since I’ll be converting them whole cloth anyway—plan to rewrite them heavily.

You see, I absolutely love Paizo’s APs, but I also fully agree with Tarondor when he says (emphasis mine), “Even the best, most complete Adventure Path demands customization for your players and for their player characters. Publishers can’t think of everything your players might like or might do. That’s what you, the GM, are for. Don’t regard an Adventure Path as a straitjacket. Regard it instead as a particularly good set of notes from which you derive your own story. If you pretend it’s supposed to be a complete package that requires no alterations or prep work and your game will be flat and lifeless, no matter how good the writing.”

Indeed, I’ll take this idea further and say that all APs suffer from too many combat encounters, a lack of foreshadowing villains and other major plot hooks, excess and unneeded story beats, and way too many places where the story and character motivations become convoluted. It’s easy for players to pause, a confused look on their faces, and say, “Wait, what are we doing here, again?” Taking out huge sections, NPCs, etc. often improves the AP rather than detracts from it. Doing so also makes room for more PC-driven stories and side quests, which can feel bolted onto the heavy AP plots.

As a result, welcome to a new project of mine: I’m going to read through each and every AP book I own and pull it into what I consider its essential parts. The result will be a massively pared-down adventure, ready to be fleshed out with details from the individual characters rather than pre-written bits. Essentially, consider these posts a narration of my process to pour over the Adventure Path and prepare to run it. When I’m done in seven days here, I should be essentially ready for Session 0.

But lo, there are caveats!

First and foremost, these edits are to my preference for the game that I want to run. What I consider “essential,” you may not, and vice-versa. You would make (or have made) different decisions, which, as the bold text above emphasizes, is both natural and part of the fun. Feel free to comment below if you see different opportunities.

Second, get ready to clutch your pearls. If you’ve run or played in Rise of the Runelords, I’m going to be deleting your favorite side quest, or NPC, or completely rewriting villain’s motivations and backstories. When I’m done, it’s not going to resemble the story you know.

Third, there will be rampant spoilers—in fact, once I dive in, these posts are essentially spoilers from start to finish. If you are a player in one of these APs or plan to be, these articles aren’t for you. (If you plan on GMing it, however… welcome!)

Finally, as I said from the outset, I don’t yet know what game system I’ll be using to run this Adventure Path, but it likely won’t be Pathfinder. Try not to get caught up in how dramatically I’m reducing the possible XP or treasure, or what I’m doing to CR of encounters.

Cool? Cool. Let’s get started!

Rise of the Runelords 1: Burnt Offerings

Burnt Offerings by Wayne Reynolds, © 2007, Paizo Publishing, LLC; Used under the Community Use Policy

We begin at the beginning! Rise of the Runelords is the very first Adventure Path set in Golarion, originally made for Dungeons and Dragons 3.5 Edition, published in six parts from August 2007 through January of 2008. Paizo also released an Anniversary Edition in 2012 for Pathfinder 1st Edition, which is what I own. In his own excellent Guide to Adventure Paths, Tarandor says, “There’s an anniversary edition, audiobooks, pawns, miniatures, plush dolls, maps, card games and a vast array of fan-made support materials. There is even a Deluxe Collector’s Edition covered in faux leather and fancy hardware. Rise of the Runelords is the quintessential adventure path.”

To deconstruct Book 1, Burnt Offerings (and all subsequent books), originally written by the incomparable James Jacobs, I’m going to be relying on Plottr, a writer’s software made to outline story arcs and beats. At the end of today’s post, I’ll show you what I’m seeing as I map out the adventure. In the meantime, I’ll be narrating my thought process.

Chapter 1: Festival and Fire

Our adventure begins in the town of Sandpoint, in the nation of Varisia. I’ll eventually write my own Player’s Guide when running this AP, but as far as I can tell, all PCs must be:

  1. Either Sandpoint locals or visitors who will want to get to know the locals. Sandpoint becomes a location the party will return to repeatedly, and the adventure presupposes you care about the town and its people.
  2. Heroes-in-waiting. Though their adventuring careers have not yet launched, these need to be characters who will, say, leap to defend the town from a goblin invasion instead of flee, hide, or take advantage of the chaos.

Other than that, all choices are on the table. The PCs can know each other or not, and be any sort of adventuring class. The party will be heavily pulled into both urban settings and harsh wilds, so all skills and abilities are welcome. I’d probably steer the party towards the most common ancestries—particularly human, since that’s the primary population of Sandpoint—but anything could work. Anyway, it will be fun, once I decide on a system, to figure out what sort of background hooks at character creation to dangle in front of players to more deeply tie them into the story. The three that scream out after reading the entire AP are:

  • If at least one PC can be keenly interested in regional history or Thassilonian history specifically, the payoffs throughout the story will be huge, and it will be easy to motivate the party towards several story beats. The more fascination with history the party has, the more their characters will love what happens.
  • Later in the AP, the story tackles the “seven sins and seven virtues” directly, and the story loosely ties to greed as a central sin. If a character is a greedy soul (keeping in mind, all PCs are fundamentally heroes)—or a particularly charitable one and anti-greed, like Robin Hood—there will be truly interesting decisions throughout the story. If a PC showcases a different sin or virtue in their motivations, there will be less consistent spotlights on them throughout the AP, but Book 5 will be a ton of fun.
  • If a PC has some sort of enmity or history with goblins, ghouls, ogres, or giants, they’ll have a grand time at various points in the AP. I wouldn’t tip the players off to this idea directly, but if there is an opportunity to nudge or replace (e.g. a PC says their parents were killed by trolls, switch it to ogres), I’d do so.

The first scene involves the party attending the annual Swallowtail Festival. This year’s festival has particular significance because the day ends with the consecration of a new cathedral, which replaces the one that burned down (part of the Late Unpleasantness that plagued Sandpoint five years ago). There are welcome speeches, festival games, the swallowtail release, lunch, and, finally, the consecration. I would keep everything described in the book (except the local nobleman Lonjiku Kaijitsu bowing out of the speeches… more on him in a bit). It all sounds like great fun, and a nice way to introduce the players to the setting and Sandpoint’s cast of characters.

As the consecration begins, the goblins that have been sneakily infiltrating the town… Attack! Egads! Goblin raid! Here the PCs swing into action and help protect the town, fighting off goblins, goblin pyros, more goblins, a goblin warchanter, still more goblins, and a goblin commando riding a goblin dog, all back-to-back-to-back in at least three linked encounters. During the chaos, they save the local nobleman Aldern Foxglove, someone who’s important in Book 2. The goblins flee, and the innkeeper Ameiko Kaijutsu offers the party free rooms at the Rusty Dragon for saving the town.

Here is where I start making changes:

  • The specific encounters are going to vary based on what system I choose to run. The important bits are a) play up the chaos of the scene, goblins everywhere, b) keep the “party fights waves of goblins” diverse and interesting so that the combat doesn’t drag, and c) make sure Foxglove gets saved. No problem and check.
  • Apparently, the goblins are aided by Tsuto Kaijitsu, son of local Lonjiku Kaitjitsu, and brother to Ameiko, who is an important NPC. The son has bribed Lonjiku to miss the festival and stay home. I’m not sure if either Tsuto or his father’s involvement in the story is necessary, especially given the pages and pages of complex behind-the-scenes activities each has and will do. Couldn’t the goblins have just snuck in and attacked, following Nualia’s (the BBEG of this book) orders? I’m dropping Tsuto’s involvement entirely, especially because I don’t love the only Asian-coded characters (except Ameiko) in the story being bad guys.
  • While the raid is happening, Tsuto leads a group of goblins into the cemetery to steal a priest’s corpse, which Nualia is going to use to start transforming into a demon. This detail is a good example of where I think AP plots get unnecessarily dense. Especially with the father-son Kaijutsu evil-doing gone, I’ll drop this bit too.

Chapter 2: Local Heroes 

For the next week(s), the PCs are local celebrities. Here there are tons of opportunities to bring Sandpoint to life, make the players connect emotionally with NPCs, and provide downtime. Part of the aftermath in the module is for Sheriff Baylor Hemlock and the PCs to discover the stolen corpse, and encounter skeletons that Tsuto summoned with a magical item to wait for them. Again… I just think all of this is too hard for the PCs to figure out and the whole skeleton thing feels forced to insert an unnecessary combat. I’ll drop it.

I do like many of the other side plots the book dangles in front of the PCs: The first involves Shayliss Vinder trying to get a PC alone to seduce them, only for Shayliss’ protective father and owner of the Sandpoint General Store Vin discovering the encounter and intervening. It’s a great and complicated social situation that could turn out several different ways.

The second side plot involves Aldern Foxglove seeking out the party to thank them for saving him, inviting them to join him on a boar hunt. If they agree, they all ride out to the Tickwood Forest and have a boar hunt! Great way to connect with Foxglove and do some skill checks (or even a non-goblin combat encounter).

I’m more ambivalent about a third suggested plot, in which a goblin from the raids hides in a boy’s closet until it becomes feral and kills the family dog. Then it kills the boy’s father, and the party cleans out the pest. It’s a fine way for there to be a sort of aftermath of the raid, but otherwise it doesn’t really serve a point except being horrible. I think as a GM I’d have this idea in my back pocket, but likely not use it.

Instead, the module encourages the GM to add whatever additional encounters fit the PCs using the detailed Sandpoint overview (and there’s also a Sandpoint campaign supplement available!), in which there are tons of hooks, and I’d dip into these ideas liberally for 1-3 additional downtime happenings. The goal of whatever side quests happen should be to a) provide real flavor to Sandpoint and its people for use throughout the AP, b) further raise (and complicate) the PC’s standing in the town, and c) because of what I’m cutting from Chapter 3, weave in some non-goblin combat. Some example ideas of countless possible additions to this chapter:

  • Naffer Vosk, keeper of the Sandpoint Boneyard, is experiencing a minor haunting problem the PCs can handle. A true side quest that can involve battling (or negotiating with) undead.
  • Brodert Quink (scholar), Veznutt Parooh (librarian), Ilsoari Gandethus (teacher and ex-adventurer) have a heated disagreement about a point of ancient Thassilonian history as it relates to Sandpoint. Perhaps the PCs can do some investigation and settle the dispute? Good opportunity to reveal some of the complex backstory of the region and explore Sandpoint’s history, along with a combat encounter of some kind.
  • The half-orc dungsweeper Gorvi has been drunkenly harassing women along the boardwalk recently. Mayor Kendra Deverin asks the party to speak to him – the town needs his services, but she fears he’s grown both bitter and entitled. An example of the sort of complex social situation that could result in several different outcomes.
  • Jargie Quinn invites the party to a night of revelry at her tavern, the Hagfish. There are games aplenty for the party to participate in, and of course the notorious dare to drink water from the hagfish Norah’s tank, all with Sandpoint’s locals egging them on. If your party likes skill challenges, here you go!
  • Ameiko keeps a “Help Wanted” board displayed in the Rusty Dragon. Easy place for a one-off side quest that leads to non-goblin combat, particularly using the detailed Sandpoint Hinterlands map from the module.
  • Sheriff Hemlock asks the party to check out some shady business going down involving an underground network of scoundrels called the Sczarni (think the Mob). The party heads to the Fatman’s Feedbag and breaks up a bar brawl, then busts up a poison-selling business happening out of Pillbug’s Pantry. The trick here is not to have this side quest spill into something spanning its own long campaign arc, but any Sczarni plots can pick up when the party later visits Magnimar, and with the poison there’s a chance to connect it to Norgorber worship in Book 2.
  • The seer Niska Mvashti has had a vision pertaining to the party. Will they brave her decrepit and scary manor house to hear it? Good chance to foreshadow something later in the AP, or to hook a PC’s backstory into Sandpoint.
  • Cydrak Drokkus, owner of the Sandpoint Theater, is attracted to the party’s recent celebrity and tries to entice them to star in his next play. (this idea fully stolen from the Legacy of the Ancients podcast)

There’s a point within the module in which a drunken Lonjiku comes into the Rusty Dragon and fights with Ameiko. This encounter is fine if you’re keeping the whole “Kaijitsu men as bad guys” stuff, which I’m not. It’s a heck of a lot easier to portray Ameiko as a bad-ass foreigner who has settled into Sandpoint. Doing so means more changes later, but I’m totally comfortable with those tweaks.

Eventually, the elven bounty hunter Shalelu Andosana (important NPC who will appear again in Book 3) visits the town and provides intelligence to the mayor about activities in the hinterlands. She’s particularly concerned about the increased goblin raids in other neighboring communities. The news is about five goblin tribes working together—which may or may not have been obvious during the Sandpoint raid, but is a good thing to foreshadow—a sign that someone (we’ll later find out it’s Nualia) is organizing them. The Sheriff then heads to the city of Magnimar to see about securing additional soldiers to protect the town and asks Shalelu to keep an eye out on the wilds. He also asks the “Heroes of Sandpoint” to protect the town while he’s gone. Before she heads out, Shalelu invites the PCs to dinner, which is an opportunity to dump a bunch of goblin lore, including foreshadowing goblin “heroes” the PCs will eventually face, one of which is the magic-longsword-wielding Koruvus, which the party will recognize from the raid (more on that detail in a bit). All these scenes are great, from my perspective.

While the Sheriff is out of town, in the module as written the PCs are meant to discover Ameiko missing – she’s been kidnapped by her brother Tsuto after a wild set of activities that happened “off camera” that the PCs will never really discover or understand. Again, I don’t love the foreigners being the evildoers, nor do I love the “damsel in distress” stuff. If I’m dropping Ameiko’s father and brother from the landscape, it’s more straightforward to have the PCs be informed that goblins have been seen at the Sandpoint Glassworks, which sets up the next chapter. The PCs know goblins are menacing the area, so it’s an easy hook. Perhaps the raiding goblins never actually left the town and have been using the Glassworks as a base of operations, healing and plotting the next attack? That idea is cleaner.

Chapter 3: Glass and Wrath

This chapter begins with a lengthy history of the Sandpoint Glassworks, Lonjiku Kaijitsu’s business, and Tsuto’s evil machinations. Again, I’m dropping this entire backstory. It’s a bridge too far for me to see a wealthy businessman’s son becoming infatuated with a monster-worshipping madwoman, and somehow having the skills to act as diplomatic liaison to goblin tribes who hate “longshanks.” In the module as written somehow both men come up with plans to kill each other, and then, after Tsuto wins, the brother and several goblins sneak into the inn and kidnap Ameiko.

In my story, after the raid the goblins simply retreated to the Glassworks to lick their wounds, and the town has been so distracted by the aftermath and the PCs celebrity (and various gossip-worthy side plots) to notice the infestation. I might even drop hints earlier, rumors of goblin-sightings in town that sound like paranoid residents more than reality. Then, an NPC that emerges from Chapter 2 will provide a credible rumor: There’s definitely goblins in the Glassworks, and no one has seen the owner (who can be a new or different NPC than Lonjiku) since the raid. Oddly, though, there’s been smoke billowing from the building’s chimney the whole time!

The rest of the chapter is the infiltration by the PCs into the Glassworks and dealing with the goblins. Paizo APs—as with any D&D-inspired adventures—are littered with dungeon crawls, and here is the first one, a 23-room building infested with baddies. How much of it I keep will largely be determined by a) what system I’m using, as some TTRPG systems make dungeon-crawling more fun than others, and b) my players’ appetites for room-by-room dungeons. Assuming I’m playing a system that supports a “theater of the mind” sort of dungeon crawl, here are the bits I like from this chapter:

  • The overall layout is fun, and a glassworking room with a burning furnace is ripe for a cinematic and interesting combat, probably the boss-fight (see below).
  • Like the goblin raid, the trick here is to figure out how many goblins populate the Glassworks and find interesting situations—based on the PCs’ approach and plan—to fight them. The book does a splendid job of making Golarion goblins fun and interesting, so there are loads of possibilities to make Gremlins-like encounters. The location also provides fun props: the furnace, broken glass, glass constructs, tools, hot tongs, etc.

What I’m first changing, obviously, is the dungeon boss. Gone is Tsuto Kaijitsu and a kidnapped Ameiko. Instead, the goblins are being led by one of those “heroes” that Shalelu told the party about over dinner: Koruvus, who I’m eliminating from the next section of the story. As a result, I’ll say Koruvus led the earlier raid on Sandpoint. I’ll also add a note to show off Koruvus during the raid, so the PCs will recognize him.

Now, goblins don’t like writing, which is a small issue with the absence of Tsuto. In my story, Nualia has drawn several maps that Koruvus has been trying to follow, which outlines her plans to invade Sandpoint and other surrounding towns. Importantly, it also shows the stronghold where the goblins have been gathering: Thistletop. There’s some opportunity for comedy, since maybe Nualia’s plan was better than what the goblins actually tried. Anyway, here is the first the PCs will learn that someone has indeed been orchestrating the goblins, as Shalelu suspected. They’ll also have a name or symbol to link back to Nualia.

While exploring the Glassworks, the PCs should discover smugglers’ tunnels that have been blockaded. In the module as written, beyond these tunnels are the Catacombs of Wrath, another dungeon. There are a lot of confusing elements to this additional dungeon for me. First, it links directly to ancient Thassilonian ruins from thousands and thousands of years prior, somehow preserved and pristine. There is a “minor runewell,” to be contrasted with a “major runewell” later in the adventure, but the PCs will never really understand these distinctions. Second, the caverns are linked to the Runelord of Wrath (there are seven Runelords, one for each classic sin), Alaznist, whereas the rest of the AP focuses on the Runelord of Greed, Karzoug. Once again, we have a complicated backstory for what this place is and how it’s led by a quasit minion who worked for a double-agent cleric of Lamashtu. There are dozens of interesting-but-weird features to the Catacombs that the PCs will never sort out, including the aforementioned goblin-hero Koruvus, who stumbled into the Catacombs of Wrath, drank corrupted waters from an altar, and became an insane, twisted monster. Like, what!? It’s just bonkers-complex, and I can’t see how it advances the main plot with Nualia or does anything but absolutely bewilder the PCs.

As far as I can tell, there are three main purposes for the wild side-dungeon of the Catacombs of Wrath:

  1. It introduces ancient Thassilon ruins beneath Sandpoint, as well as the idea of the Runelords (and their connection to the monster goddess Lamashtu).
  2. The party gets MOAR! dungeon crawling and battles against something other than goblins.
  3. In Book 5, there is a sinkhole that reveals another level to this dungeon, Lamashtu’s Shrine, which the party will explore.

I’m not at all worried about #3, as for me it’s easier and more believable for a sinkhole to simply reveal ruins on their own (also, spoiler alert: I’ve heavily reworked this part of Book 5). I can keep the smuggler’s tunnels being blockaded, but completely inaccessible until Book 5, keeping some foreshadowing but without the (in my opinion, unnecessary) distraction. I also don’t feel the need to tip the adventure’s hand on ancient Thassilon or Runelords quite yet. The AP is called “Rise of the Runelords,” after all: there will be Runelord-foreshadowing aplenty. In addition, the Caverns push the module into feeling too dungeon-heavy, after what were delightful character-driven plots earlier. Finally, I strongly suspect the party will be depleted after the Glassworks so, what? They go sleep at the inn and then return to same location? I don’t like it at all.

Interestingly, what I’m most concerned about when dropping the Caverns of Wrath is overreliance on goblins as the sole antagonist (and note that I’m not tackling the “goblins as sentient monsters needing to be exterminated” problem, which run throughout the first half of the AP… to run Rise of the Runelord is to accept a Sandpoint-versus-goblins conflict). With cutting the skeletons from the cemetery, Tsuto, and the Caverns, I’m leaving only goblin combats. That could get boring and repetitive, especially given what’s coming in Chapter 4 of this book. As mentioned, I’ll weave non-goblin threats into Chapter 2, but it’s something to watch.

Which brings us to…

Chapter 4: Thistletop

The party should get some time to recover from the Glassworks, sharing the discovery of the coordinated goblin tribes and their stronghold at Thistletop. There’s an opportunity here to continue whatever story beats emerged in Chapter 2 as well. The PCs can wait for Sheriff Hemlock to return or not – basically, the level of urgency is in their hands. That said, I’d probably have the town urge them to deal with it relatively quickly, as the Glassworks revelation shows that Sandpoint is going to be in constant danger until the goblins are dealt with. Thistletop is only six miles from the town!

Eventually, then, the party travels the Lost Coast Road to Thistletop. The way is plagued on the coast by tangles of nettlewood and poisonous plants, so there’s an opportunity to do some overland skill checks and exploration. The module suggests not adding encounters to the journey, but I might insert a wildlife encounter of some kind, again to break up the focus on goblin combat.

Thistletop is “a curiously round island about 60 feet offshore, connected to the mainland by a rope bridge.” There is, again, a fantastically complex backstory to the island, but it amounts to the place being part of the Runelord Karzoug’s territory, and the structure itself is the head of a long-ago toppled sentinel statue. A lot of the complexity is needless and stuff the players will never uncover, but it being a former Karzoug stronghold is cool, and I like the idea that the goblins don’t really understand why they gather here or the ancient ruins they’re sitting on.

The coastal area across the bridge and the primary complex of Thistletop is a large 40-room “outdoor dungeon.” The PCs must decide how they’ll navigate the tangled nettlewood and approach the stronghold – across the bridge, across the water, or through goblin tunnels? I like the tactical strike-team aspect of this setup, though I’d probably discuss the party’s plan, then drop them in media res like a Blades in the Dark heist rather than treat it as a square-by-square crawl.

As you can imagine, there are a lot of goblin encounters around and within Thistletop. Depending on the system I’m using and how the table feels about more gobbos, I’d adjust what’s in the module. Ones I particularly like:

  • A goblin druid (and advisor to the goblin chief) Gogmurt and his cougar Tangletooth, who have a lair on the coast.
  • The rope bridge is, of course, rigged to topple bigger creatures into the water. And in the water is a prowling bunyip the goblins feed things to. Love it.
  • Goblin patrols riding goblin dogs. I love the idea that several tribes are trying to coexist in Thistletop, so I’d amp up the friction and flavorful differences between the goblins (this theme will continue in Books 4 and 6, so it’s good to practice these dynamics here).
  • In the stronghold itself, a pen of captured and tortured horses (Golarion goblins hate horses), including a warhorse named Silvermist. The warhorse has already killed several goblins who tried to harass it and is a fun potential ally / mount / animal companion.
  • A throne room battle with Warchief Ripnugget, who rides his giant gecko Stickfoot! He also carries a silver holy symbol of the goddess Lamashtu, given to him by Nualia.
  • A “harem room” with Ripnugget’s four wives, who are currently entertaining the bugbear Bruthazmus. I like the idea of adding some feral goblin children here or in an adjacent room, which is a more complicated encounter for a moral party.

There are other parts I’d likely cut, such as a big crowd of goblin refugees whose chief died in the Sandpoint raid, a human mercenary named Orik Vancaskerkin and a human spellcaster Lyrie Akenja  (again, goblins hate longshanks, and I would want to emphasize Nualia’s monstrous associations, not her human ones… you’ll see me cutting humans loyal to Karzoug a lot in this AP), and a creature called a tentamort that Nualia incongruously allows to prowl in the goblin portion of the stronghold.

Eventually, the heroes will make their way to the lower portions of the stronghold. Here the décor becomes more civilized, better maintained though obviously ancient (a cool detail is that the floors are all slanted in this part of the ruins, since it was destroyed in the cataclysm Earthfall that destroyed the Thassilonian empire), and Lamashtu-themed. Nualia has been residing in this section, keeping some distance from the goblin horde. For me, this is where the payoff of Nualia comes in… and the opponents change as dramatically as the surroundings. No more goblins from here on out… only monstrous awfulness.

That said, I’m not sure if I’d keep the dungeon as-is for Level 2 (where Nualia is). There are traps that feel old-school D&D and I’d have to decide if they fit, plus decidedly too few monsters. Maybe I’d move the tentacular tentamort here, along with another twisted mutant or demon of some kind (the book has a yeth hound, but I’m saving inhabitants of the dimension Leng until Book 6). The point is that Nualia keeps this area for her own monstrous beasties and, eventually, they must face the cleric of Lamashtu herself. Nualia will need to monologue a bit to get across her motivations, but it’s important for her to a) talk up her zealous following of the Mother of Monsters and desire to transform into a half-fiend herself, and b) invoke Karzoug’s name somehow and show herself as tainted by greed. There are also the telltale (and almost trope-y) notes she’ll leave behind, which can further detail her backstory. After Nualia is dead or has fled, there’s a nice half-flooded treasure room with a giant hermit-crab which I’ll keep, especially given how many treasure-worthy encounters I’m cutting from earlier in the book.

Paizo does this thing in APs that I find curious: inserting a deadly encounter either right before or after the Big Boss Battle with a creature that is either as difficult or more than the Big Boss. It’s… peculiar. Here, after finding the room in which Nualia has been performing her awful rituals of transformation and self-mutilation, there is a prison with a greater barghest named Malfeshnekor. This creature has a complicated backstory (again, tied to the Runelord Alaznist, not Karzoug!) and is notoriously one of the deadliest in the AP. So, you know what? I don’t see any reason to keep it at all. Once the party has defeated Nualia and braved the crab-guarding treasure chamber (which I like as a nod towards the sin of greed), the battle is won and the stronghold is conquered.

With Nualia gone, the fragile truce of the various goblin tribes dissolves and the threat to Sandpoint is neutralized. The Heroes of Sandpoint return to fanfare, wrapping up whatever character-driven story beats need wrapping up. It’s time for some well-earned downtime for the party.

I really like this bit from the module itself as a final thought: “Relatively little involving the metaplot of Rise of the Runelords occurs during the course of Burnt Offerings. Although the chapter’s events are closely tied to Karzoug’s awakening, and certain characters in the adventure have ties to characters whom the PCs are destined to meet later in the campaign, the adventure’s primary purpose is to introduce them to their new home of Sandpoint and to instill in them a desire to protect it and its citizens.” I agree wholeheartedly that a lot of the actual Runelord plot can wait, and this book should instead be about becoming embedded in Sandpoint and establishing the party as heroes. If they can transition from goblin hunters to full monster hunters along the way, all the better.

Deconstructed Burnt Offerings

So, when the dust settles on book one of my first AP, here is what I see in Plottr:

At its most bare bones, it’s basically the tale of a monster-worshipping villain orchestrating goblin tribes to harass the community. The heroes are caught in the initial raid, eventually finding their way to the heart of the threat to eliminate it. Along the way, the party becomes embedded in the community of Sandpoint, learns some of its deep and troubling history, and uncover hints at an ancient evil from ages long past. That brief summary sounds like one of the more classic and fun ways to begin a campaign!

Since we’re just beginning, if you find yourself annoyed by what I’ve cut or changed, I’ll earnestly remind you of the caveats at the top of the article. That said, if you’ve made different choices as GM, I’d love to hear it. Speaking of which, I’m still feeling my way in this series, please do drop a comment or email me at jaycms@yahoo.com with any and all thoughts.

Choosing a Light Heroic System, Part 2: 13th Age

On By MagicJMSIn Tabletop Roleplaying3 Comments

Last month, I wrote about a new project that’s been niggling at my brain.

A brief recap: I found myself able to purchase a number of complete Paizo Adventure Paths at a big discount. But—although Pathfinder 2e is a system I know deeply—I don’t have interest in the intensely-crunchy, prep-heavy work of GMing a complete AP in PF2e (which I’ve done before). Instead, I’m on the hunt for a tabletop game with the following features:

  • allows for crazy (super-)heroic stunts without the crunch
  • fun to GM and easy to make stuff (like monsters, hazards, etc.)
  • suitable for a long campaign (i.e. has some sort of character progression or at least the players won’t get bored with overly simplistic mechanics)
  • can’t be tied too deeply into a setting – my intention is to keep the Golarion lore of the APs mostly intact

In other words, I’m looking for a system that is both interesting and complex enough that it can handle long-form storytelling, but light enough that I don’t have to spend hundreds of hours prepping.

Last month’s article explored Daggerheart, a game that I like far more than I expected to. In fact, after one of my weekly groups finished playing through the Sky King’s Tomb AP in PF2e, they were kind enough to let me run a test session of Daggerheart, with me converting the intro adventure in Paizo’s Beginner Box, called Menace Under Otari. This experiment was both a test of how fun the game is to GM and play, but also how easy it is to convert from PF2e to Daggerheart. It was a great success, and the group asked for a second session to keep going. So, as I mentioned in the previous post, I may have already discovered my system of choice on the first try.

That said, I’ve purchased four additional games to explore, so explore them I shall. If I’m going to dedicate years of my life leaning into a game playing the expansive Paizo APs, I want to feel good about my due diligence. What’s funny is that, because of inventory shortages and shipping delays, I am receiving each game staggered over months. These delays have made my ability to sit down and really absorb each book easy, without the others staring at me from The Stack (games I’ve bought but haven’t read yet).

The second game to appear on my doorstep is… 13th Age, 2e!

13th Age, Second Edition

Cover of the 13th Age 2e Heroes' Handbook

13th Age, unlike Daggerheart, is not at all a new game. Pelgrane Press (also known for the Gumshoe system) first released it in 2013, but somehow the game completely eluded my radar until it released its second edition last year. Apparently, this second edition is compatible with everything from 1e, which means there are literally dozens of supplement books to expand upon the new Heroes’ Handbook and Gamemaster’s Guide. I’m not literate enough in the differences to know how easy it is to convert content between the two editions, but it’s cool and impressive that you can do so.

13th Age is a d20 system, and so the base mechanics will be familiar to pretty much any TTRPG enthusiast. I’m surprised at how few reviews I found of the second edition, but check out this excellent overview from Scroll for Initiative and this one from TTRPG Thoughts. Both give you a sense of where 13th Age veers away from D&D 5e, simplifying the mechanics to make it less about tactical, grid-based combat and more of a story game. I’ve been hooked on Sly Flourish’s podcast recently, and he’s said that 13th Age 1e is one of his absolute favorite games to run and GM, and keeps teasing a review of 2e. When he delivers the review, I’ll link it here.

When I initially posted my quest for a new system on Reddit, 13th Age was one of the most-suggested systems for me to explore. As I mentioned the game to friends, my buddy Rob got excited, as it’s also a system he’s wanted to check out. I had the same dizzying feeling diving into 13th Age as I did when I first discovered Dungeon Crawl Classics – I consume SO much TTRPG media, how had I not known about this game until now!? Our hobby is so relatively small, and yet bafflingly vast.

Why 13th Age Works For Me

Anyway, 13th Age 2e turns out to be a game that is very, very cool. Like the reviews I linked above, I’m going to spotlight some of the mechanics I think are particularly great, and how they work with my Adventure Path dreams.

Icons – In 13th Age, the GM defines the powerful entities shaping the world in which the PCs are adventuring. These can be everything from the Queen of the Elves, the High Priest of Abador, the local thieves’ guild head, or even the devil-god Asmodeus. It’s an acknowledgement that every fantasy story has these near-mythical figures in the background, shaping the world. In 13th Age, however, each PC is explicitly linked to at least one of these Icons, and this connection has mechanical impact on the story and game.

The entire conceit of Icons is so cool, I’m bewildered when I read 13th Age forums that many GMs don’t bother with them. For my purposes, it sounds like an absolute blast to define the Icons for a given Adventure Path, and to include them in whatever Player’s Guide I create. Indeed, even if I don’t end up using 13th Age for my campaigns, I’m probably stealing this idea.

Image from the 13th Age 2e Gamester's Guide cover

Simplified… Most Things – Any game I choose for this project is going to do things like abstract ranges during combat, allow players to roll for checks based on their general background instead of tied to explicit skills, and hand-wave crunchy mechanics. 13th Age, however, really tries to lean away from the stuff that slows games down. Gear is massively simplified, and distinction between most weapons and armor is mostly flavor. Damage is flat instead of rolled, which occurs to me is a huge speed boost. Monster stat blocks are shorter, easy to hack, and focused on interesting, unique abilities. There are “mooks,” which can get mowed down in large numbers. All these features, to me, take away the crunchy bits that bog down many d20 game experiences, especially higher-level combat. The game still has a big spotlight on combat encounters, but it does its best to not make every session dominated by them.

The Escalation Die – Relatedly, a small mechanic that demonstrates the underlying goals of 13th Age’s design is the Escalation Die. On Turn 2, all PCs get a +1 to attack rolls. The next turn it’s +2. Etc. etc. The result is both a) shorter combats, and b) increasing dramatic action in the later rounds of combat, all tilted towards the heroic characters. I love how it encourages players to hold onto big one-shot abilities instead of blowing them all on Turn 1. This is the sort of feature that makes OSR-lover’s heads explode but works perfectly for a game meant to be more like the Marvel Cinematic Universe.

Narrative Arcs and Recoveries – Something a lot of more modern games do is make healing and recovery its own minigame. In 13th Age, PCs begin with 8-9 “recoveries,” which are essentially an auto-heal, and often let you reset lost powers. As a result, 13th Age parties don’t need a dedicated healer like in most d20 games, and this mechanic avoids unnatural rest-stops in the action, keeping characters pressing forward through dramatic arcs. Then, when a party finishes an “arc” (which is story-based, usually containing 3-4 encounters), everyone receives a Full Heal-Up. The focus, then, is on the momentum of the story, not resource-depletion or nights at an inn. As a GM, the game asks you to set up each PC level-up based on a number of arcs (which can be one-arc-per-level for short campaigns or multiple-arcs-per-level for longer ones), which fits perfectly within the structure of an Adventure Path. Like Daggerheart, 13th Age only has 10 total levels available to PCs, which I’m realizing is another common feature of modern games and something I like.

One Unique Thing – Finally, something many people highlight in 13th Age discussions in the “One Unique Thing” during character creation – something about each PC that is utterly distinct in the campaign and explicitly agreed upon between the player and GM. Maybe they’re the only surviving prince of a lost nation, or have a twin separated at birth, or are destined to wield the Blade of Dreams… whatever. It’s a firm statement that these PCs are different from the other inhabitants of the land in which they live. They’re special. They’re heroes. Unlike Icons, the One Unique Thing aspect of a character doesn’t have mechanical impact on the game per se, but it’s a flavorful and fun way to encourage players to think big, and gives GMs loads of potential hooks for the story. Oh, and I should say that Level 1 characters in 13th Age are bad-ass… this is not a d20 game where you need to wait until Level 3-4 for your character to feel powerful.

All these features add up to a game that looks like a d20 game at first blush, but which pushes players and GMs to embrace the over-the-top-ness of heroic fantasy, all while speeding up the combat bits so they don’t dominate each session. That all sounds perfect for running Paizo APs, honestly.

My 13th Age Concerns

By far the biggest concern as I gleefully read the new books is that 13th Age, while focusing on speeding up the game, is still by far the crunchiest game of the ones I’m considering. Or, put another way, I’m convinced that 13th Age plays faster than other d20 games, but is it simpler to run for the GM?

Take the sample character, Alyssa the human paladin, that becomes the focus of the tutorial front matter of the Heroes’ Handbook: It’s a busy character sheet, with three Talents, two Backgrounds, and five Features/Powers/Spells, on top of six Ability Scores, three Defense scores, two Icon relationships, weapons, Recoveries, Hit Points, etc. That’s a level ONE character, and already a lot for any player to track, much less for a GM across a party of 3-5 PCs, plus monsters, hazards, etc. In combat, there are free actions, move actions, standard actions, and interrupt actions, there’s delaying and readying actions, there are opportunity attacks, and there are “special action” combat maneuvers like rallying and combat assists. Add a whole bunch of supplemental material from 1e and more 2e books on the way, and I worry about substituting one prep-heavy system for a slightly-less-but-still-burdensome one. Maybe it’s just because I’m new to the system and haven’t taken 13th Age for a test run, but the cognitive load on running the game seems high, which is the opposite of what I want.

The monsters give me a little hope in this regard. Flipping through the Gamemaster’s Guide, the entries aren’t overwhelming to consume: Even demons, dragons, giants, and other high-level critters have relatively few things to remember. And though there are additional “Nastier” abilities available to spring on a party, nothing I saw felt like the page-long entries of D&D 5e and Pathfinder. When I was running a 1-20 campaign in PF2e, it got to a place where I dreaded high-level battles because of the sheer number of things I had to remember to make the combat interesting. The complexity feels high in 13th Age on the PC side of the equation, but not so much on the monster side. Indeed, the monster entries for 13th Age, I’m suddenly realizing, are probably simpler to run than in Daggerheart.

My second concern is that on forums I’ve seen a handful of 13th Age GMs say that, at some point in the campaign, the PCs basically became unkillable, and it’s a struggle to properly challenge them. I’m all for a heroic—even superheroic—game, but epic stories come from peril and stakes. If the party can shrug off the BBEG and their vast hordes without breaking a sweat, the game ultimately isn’t fun for anyone. What’s more problematic about this issue is that it only rears its head after dozens of game sessions, at which point there’s a sunk cost in the system.

Ultimately, the only way I’ll really figure out my comfort with 13th Age’s complexity and power creep is to both play and GM it. I think that I’ll do what I did for Daggerheart—try converting part of the Pathfinder Beginner Box’s intro adventure, Menace Under Otari, and run a one-shot. Doing so will large skirt the Icon and One Unique Thing features, but will at least give me a sense of how prepping a game feels, how crunchy combat is, and how satisfying non-combat scenes are. I’m cautiously optimistic!

One Game to Launch My Journey

Despite my earlier bravado, in the darkest shadows of my soul I have a suspicion that I haven’t found my lighter heroic system yet. Daggerheart is super fun, but there are idiosyncrasies when running it that puzzle me (check out this awesome review that came out since my last post, which does a nice job explaining some of my head-scratching), and 13th Age feels like an awesome medium-crunch game, not necessarily as light as I want it to be. If I were going to put my bet on a system, it’s going to be Nimble, but that’s the fifth and last game to hit my physical mailbox. In the meantime, this is a puzzle that I will continue to ponder. As problems go, this system challenge is a delightful one. I’ll check back in a month or so with a new system to explore.

Please comment below or send an email to jaycms@yahoo.com with any feedback.

ToC32: Two Days

On By MagicJMSIn Fantasy Fiction, Tabletop Roleplaying, Tales of Calvenor3 Comments

[game-notes version here]

Artwork by © anaislalovi. All rights reserved

XXXII.

Thawmere 12, Wyrdsday, Year 732

“Running was a dumb move, lass,” Maelen muttered grumpily. The warrior peered out of the smoked glass of the chandlery, the window speckled with old wax and soot. The smell of tallow and beeswax hung heavily in the air.

“You’ve only said it half a dozen times,” Vessa replied sourly, crossing her arms. “And okay… I panicked.”

“Not like you,” Maelen squinted. “You’ve had a warrant on your head before.”

“It wasn’t the warrant,” she whispered fiercely. Vessa’s eyes darted to the chandlery’s proprietor, a balding, middle-aged man with a long neck like a turtle. He saw her looking and swallowed hard, turning to needlessly busy himself with shelves crowded with candles, blocks of wax, and little jars of resin. They’d paid him a handful of silver to let the two of them stand in his store and watch the Heart & Dagger’s front door, but she still worried what he might say to a City Watch official if questioned.

An older woman in flowing red robes entered the chandlery with the tinkle of a bell. Maelen and Vessa pretended to be looking at candles as she passed them. She paused and regarded them.

“Ah, Sister Hestara!” the chandler said in greeting, his voice nasal. “A little early for your monthly visit, isn’t it?”

Vessa’s back was to the woman as she did her best to look innocuous. The customer said nothing for a long while, then exhaled audibly. When she spoke, her voice was rich and full. “Yes, Mister Fenn, it is. I was… well, you might say I felt inspired as I passed by this evening. Do you mind if I browse?”

The conversation went on behind them and Vessa leaned close to Maelen. “It wasn’t the warrant,” she repeated in a low whisper. “It was the man! This Brannic, he was there that night, in the alley, don’t you remember?”

Maelen scowled and turned away from the window. “What? Part of the merchant boy’s crew?”

Vessa waved a no and shook her head. “No, just in the alley. I think maybe he was their mark.”

The warrior thought about it, frowning. She leaned over and peered again out of the smudged window, to watch those entering the tavern next door. Eventually, she muttered. “Why would a book merchant’s son try to beat up an Iron Thorn agent? It makes no sense. Anyway, running was still dumb. Who cares if he was in the alley?”

Vessa sighed and took a step to where she could see out between two thick white candles upon a shelf. With the evening twilight and the smudgy glass, it wasn’t the easiest view, but she figured either Alric or Brannic would be easy enough to spot. Her eyes flicked left. Near the Lakeshore Walk, a narrow stone-and-plank promenade that curved around the perimeter of Lake Miran, sat a worn stone bench. Reclining against the bench, arms folded in the chill air, was Rusk. Vessa thought that, if they were going to quickly intercept Alric, it would be best if the hired thug wasn’t with them. Besides, an extra pair of eyes outside always helped.

“Excuse me? Ma’am?” that full, rich voice said from a stride away. Both Maelen and Vessa turned to see the woman in red robes. She was an attractive older woman, perhaps of fifty years, with a defined jaw and intense, pale blue eyes framed by brown hair pulled back in a braid. The clothes were exceptionally well-made, heavy wool with a faint sheen, with black silk cuffs and hood, and cut asymmetrically to cover the left side of her body while leaving her pale right arm and lower leg tastefully exposed. A small brass pendant in the shape of a flame hung at her throat. Ah, Vessa realized. A priestess of the Flame, then, a small religious order who worshipped the Ash Queen. Vessa had never met one who didn’t unsettle her with their zealotry.

The woman’s gaze fell fully on Maelen. The warrior frowned and took her in from head to toe, same as Vessa.

“Yeah?” she grunted.

“That… weapon on your belt,” the woman nodded her head towards the black mace. “Do you mind if I ask how it came into your possession?”

“Listen, lady,” Maelen said dismissively, doing her best to look every bit the street tough. “I do mind. Go away.” And with that, the warrior turned her back on the priestess and crouched to peer again through the window. Somewhere out of sight, the chandler gasped.

The woman looked startled, then a line formed between her eyes and she pressed her lips together, clearly irritated. She cleared her throat. “I am afraid I cannot do that,” she said curtly. “That weapon is demon-born. Give it to me now, in the name of the gods.”

Silence fell in the chandlery. Maelen stood upright, slowly, and turned to regard the priestess. “Excuse me?” she growled, low and mean.

“Mae…” Vessa whispered urgently, reaching to place a calming hand upon her shoulder. Ever since the Starless Rift, her friend had been… angry. Maelen had always been a bruiser by nature, but one of the things that impressed Vessa early on was the warrior’s ability to reason her way out of a situation. Recently, it was as if she were a beaten dog tied to a post, snapping at anyone who came near. Which, she realized uncomfortably, was very much like the description the seer Wink had given her.

Maelen shrugged off Vessa’s touch and stepped towards the priestess. “You want it?” she sneered, slowly pulling the black mace from her belt loop. “Come take it from me, then.”

Vessa gave the robed woman credit; if the priestess was intimidated, she masked it well. Her eyes momentarily widened at Maelen’s advance and then her face set in determination. “I see,” she said simply. She raised her voice without taking eyes off Maelen. “Mister Fenn? I will not bring trouble to your shop. I might suggest you close up for the evening, however, and call the City Watch if these two trouble you.”

The woman’s posture straightened imperiously as she addressed Maelen. Her friend stopped her advance but tensed, growling low in her throat. “I tell you this now plainly: That weapon is an instrument of destruction. Shadows and darkness follow it, and has likely,” she looked Maelen up and down. “darkened your soul. Bring it to the Temple of the Flame and you can be rid of this burden. I give you two days.”

“Or what?” Maelen snarled, muscles flexing.

The woman’s eyes swung to Vessa. “Two days,” she intoned, and the words struck her like a weight. Then, in a swirl of red fabric, turned and swept out of the chandlery.

The little bell tinkled, and the sound of the door shutting echoed in the small shop. Vessa was stunned, while Maelen panted, mace gripped tightly in her hand. Silence reigned for several heartbeats, and then the shop owner cleared his throat nervously.

“I– I think I will close up now,” he squeaked. “It’s about time.”

“Of course,” Vessa said immediately, before Maelen could yell at the man. “We’re sorry for any trouble.” She moved towards the door. “Come on, Mae.”

Outside, the evening gloom had swallowed the lakeside, and all around them lanterns were being lit upon the street and in windows. Across the street, Rusk hunched his shoulders and pushed off from the bench, sauntering slowly towards them.

“What in blazes was that?” Vessa snapped.

Her friend barked back. “What? She wanted to take it!”

“She wanted to talk,” she corrected. “Then you picked a fight. With a priestess! And what if what she said is true?”

“It’s a weapon,” Maelen grunted. “Of course it’s made for destruction.”

“Not that,” Vessa said. “The part about darkness, and demons. And your soul.”

Rusk was within earshot now and Maelen flicked her gaze towards him. “Enough of that. Leave it. Where’s the bloody lad?”

“There,” Rusk whispered as he joined them, jerking his chin towards the road. Maelen and Vessa turned to see a figure robed in black, hood up and shrouding his face, hobbling towards the Heart & Dagger’s entrance with the help of a wooden staff. The robe, staff, and limp all matched Alric, but the figure was too thin and stooped.

“Not him,” Maelen shook her head. “That’s an old man.”

“Wait,” Vessa cautioned. Her eyes were the keenest of them, and she saw the lamplight play off the runes upon the staff. “I think… I think it may be.” Without waiting for the others to respond, she strode towards the frail, bent figure with purpose. Instinctively, she moved quietly, on guard.

“Alric?” she called out when she was within lunging distance. The figure stopped and turned its hood. She could now clearly see the hands gripping the staff, pale and bony.

“Vessa,” he sighed, relieved. Incongruously, it was Alric’s voice, completely unchanged. “I was going to tell you that we should move our meeting to somewhere more private. Brannic is coming, and wants to speak with you.”

A hand went to her mouth in shock. “What happened to you?”

“Ah, yes, well,” Alric chuckled. She could only see vague details beneath the hood, but what she saw looked skeletal. “I may have tried a new spell, to mixed results.”

“Let’s get out of here,” she gasped, reaching to take one of his arms. It felt shockingly thin. “Let me help you.”

“Much obliged,” he nodded once, with relief.

She helped the unsettlingly frail Alric to Vessa’s inn near the docks. She did not speak with him on the trek, and neither did Maelen. Her friend did shoot her a look when she thought Alric wasn’t looking, though, of pressed lips and concern. Rusk, thankfully, said nothing and followed behind, strolling as if alone and without a care in the world.

It was well after dark when they arrived, but thankfully they never saw the Iron Thorn investigator from earlier that day. The inn was a two-story wedge of weathered timber, sitting slightly askew upon on the dock and between shops that were dark and closed up for the night. A row of iron lantern-hooks ran along the eaves, each lit behind smoky and salt-flecked glass. The signboard outside couldn’t be bothered with iconography, and said, simply enough, “The Swaying Lantern” upon it in plain script.

Inside, the common room was dimly lit by the glow of the large iron stove in the back, sitting squatly behind a long, scarred counter. The tables were narrow and communal—not ideal for them talking, but Vessa had chosen this place precisely because the clientele were usually sailors from other cities, other nations, often speaking only a few words of Calvenori. Few people here cared who they were, and more importantly cared not at all for the warrant attached to her.

She led them across sanded planks, Alric’s limp making a scraping sound across them along with the steady thump thump of his staff, and hailed the innkeeper.

“Voss,” she nodded with a crooked smile. He was a neat, polite, and soft-spoken man with close-cropped hair and no beard, a true surprise in this rough-and-tumble place. Indeed, the innkeeper of the Swaying Lantern reminded her somewhat of Alric, and would have fit better in the Inkbinders Lodge than the Oakton docks. He wiped his hands fastidiously on a white apron and nodded to her.

“How many?” he asked without preamble.

“Four of us,” she said. “But just water for one and two ales for another. And do you still have that crab stew from last night?”

He smiled. “I do indeed.”

“Four bowls of that, then. And bread?”

“I’ll bring them over to you,” he confirmed, and then he bowed slightly. Vessa smiled and hurried back over to the table, where Maelen was already grilling Alric in low, urgent tones.

“About Vessa?” Alric was saying, keeping his hood up and shrouding his face in shadows. “He asked about both of you, how I knew you, that sort of thing.”

“Nothing about her warrant, though?” Maelen asked, scowling.

Alric paused, as if thinking. Vessa couldn’t keep her eyes from his wrist and hands, almost skeletal. What had happened to him? Eventually, his rich baritone voice said. “No, nothing about Vessa specifically at all. It felt like he was just making conversation, honestly. What he really wanted to discuss was a woman named Sera Vellorin.”

“Dammit all to the Rootmother’s teats!” Maelen swore. Vessa winced.

“You know her?” he asked.

“Not directly, no,” Maelen frowned, and her eyes tracked over to Rusk. She clearly still wasn’t sure what she could and couldn’t say in the man’s presence. Vessa cleared her throat when it was clear she wasn’t going to offer more.

“She’s a book merchant,” Vessa offered. Maelen shot her a look that she ignored. “And mother of the kid I stabbed.”

“Oh,” Alric said, cocking his hooded head, as if again thinking. “Interesting. Well, the investigator said she’s bribing Lodge members to gain access to hidden archives. The… uh,” and now his head swept over to Rusk as well. “The forbidden ones.”

Silence fell on the table, and in that silence, Voss brought their food and drink upon a wide tray. He carefully placed each mug and bowl in front of each of them, then doled out four iron spoons and slices of bread upon small wooden plates. With another slight bow, he took his leave. Steam rose from the stew, and the inviting smell of crab and vegetables made Vessa’s mouth water. Rusk dove into his meal with abandon, slurping ale and stew with equal enthusiasm. Alric sipped his water and blew on the stew before trying it.

Maelen hadn’t moved, her mind working over what she’d heard. Eventually, she took a long drink from a mug and said, “Too many damned connections. Lad, what happened to your body? Are you two weak to make some coin?”

“As I told Vessa,” he said after a spoonful. “A spell got away from me, a spell I used to escape the investigator when he began asking about the Lodge. I should recover… I’ll just need to eat. Speaking of which, good stew, Vessa.” Much to her surprise, she felt her cheeks warming in a blush, as if she’d been the one to cook the meal and deserved praise for it.

Flustered, she ran a hand through her hair and said, “Yeah. Voss is a gem. You do think you’ll recover, then?”

He shrugged a thin shoulder. “I suppose. Or, rather, there’s no reason to think that I won’t.” The hood turned again to Maelen. “What did you have in mind, Maelen? For the coin, I mean.”

“I met a guy,” she said, chewing on a piece of bread. “Said he’d found a secret ruin in the city, untouched. Thinks there’s valuables there and promised a cut.”

“Oh, I’m relieved,” Alric chuckled. “That it’s in the city, I mean. I don’t feel up for another trek in the wilds, and I’d like to continue my research.”

“So, that’s a yes, then?” she said, her mouth full. “Vess?”

“I… sure, I guess. But shouldn’t we deal with this Vellorin business?”

Maelen grunted. “It’s too tangled. I can’t see the angle for us. Better we get out of sight for a few days, let it sort itself out. But a secret ruin sounds better to me than running from the Iron Thorn and some shady book dealer.”

And, Vessa thought unkindly, it lets you duck the priestess of the Flame’s attention. Worry knotted in her stomach, then. Could Maelen’s anger issues have to do with the mace? Maelen had said they weren’t related, but maybe her friend’s judgment couldn’t be trusted these days? Her instincts told her that allowing the two-day deadline to pass would lead to trouble, something they already had in vast amounts. Then there was Alric, who—despite his brave words—looked like he should be spending time resting, not tromping through dangerous ruins. Could he even use his magic, now?

She wasn’t sure how long she’d been quiet as these thoughts tumbled through her head. All eyes at the table were fixed on her, waiting. Maelen wouldn’t like her answer, but Vessa thought they should visit the temple of the Flame before making any decisions. She could loan Alric money to continue his research, since she hadn’t managed to spend her spoils from the Starless Rift yet. It might buy him time to recover.

Just then Rusk wiped his mouth and belched. “We’re in,” he said in his low whisper of a voice, thumping his fist on the table for emphasis. “When do we leave?”

Vessa blinked in surprise. Had he just… answered for the both of them? Alric stiffened in his seat, noting the same.

Maelen grinned and nodded at the man. “Tomorrow morning,” she said to them all. “I’ll go now and find Neddy.”

With that, her friend pushed herself from the table, slapped a couple of silver coins onto the table, and stalked out of the inn.

Next …?

Alas, dear reader… I’m sorry to surprise you with the news, but it’s now time for me to hit the pause button on this labor of love. You see, I’ve gotten a new job, which is overall good news. For the first time since the global pandemic, however, I’ll be commuting to an office, during those wee hours that I’ve spent writing. I’ll be too knackered in the evenings to keep up my current writing pace, and weekends will undoubtedly become packed with Adult Stuff™. There will be time for writing (because, let’s face it, I can’t help myself), but it will be catch-as-catch-can instead of 1-2 posts per week.

This story has been a personal triumph. It’s my most committed attempt at a homebrew world, and I’ve fallen in love with Calvenor and its eternal struggle between City-Gods and Demon-Gods. I will absolutely return to this setting and story—especially since this job is likely the last one I’ll do for 4-6 years before retiring. Then I’ll be writing a LOT. I’m too interested in Alric, Vessa, and Maelen’s tale not to return to them. I’ll also keep playing Tales of Argosa—both solo and with friends—as I’ve fallen in love with it as well. Indeed, I suspect that Tales of Argosa, Dungeon Crawl Classics, various superhero games, and some sort of lighter heroic system, will continue to fuel my nerdy imagination until I’m gone from this world.

Never fear: The blog itself is not taking a hiatus. The truth is that my fiction here gets a fraction of the views that my game reviews do, and I have an idea for an ongoing review series that is percolating. Writing reviews, it turns out, is easy to do sporadically and when the spirit moves me, whereas fiction is something that, once started, requires me to keep writing—pretty much daily—to keep the plot and tone in my head. That said, I may throw the occasional short story up here as well. We’ll see. If there’s one thing I’ve realized these past many years, it’s that my own ability to predict the future is basically zero.

As always, feel free to comment below or email me at jaycms@yahoo.com.

ToC32: Two Days [with game notes]

On By MagicJMSIn Fantasy Fiction, Tabletop Roleplaying, Tales of Calvenor3 Comments

[prose-only version here]

Artwork by © anaislalovi. All rights reserved

As I started to track the various interweaving plots going on in this third story, I realized that I didn’t have any handholds for Maelen’s “something something about the Bonebreaker” thread. Since I think now is a good time to start piling onto the PC’s shoulders, let’s figure it out.

To do so, I’m going to once again lean upon the excellent Tome of Adventure Design by Matt Finch. As I’ve said before, there are so many fun tables in there, it’s almost impossible not to be inspired. In scanning through them, I like Table 3-7: Item-Based Backstories as a way of figuring out a bit about the Bonebreaker and what sort of twists it might add into our story. There are a couple factors to roll on here. I’ll start with: What was the Bonebreaker’s relationship to Thornmere Hold? I roll d100 and get “Was used for a crime.” Oh ho! So, the black mace wasn’t used to defeat Orthuun centuries ago, it was an instrument of the demon-god’s armies! It’s no wonder, then, that no weapon was present in the Starless Rift, because Sarin the Vanished, Orthuun’s general, retrieved it. Let’s do one more roll: What is the “other factor” involved? Another d100 gives me: “Bragging, showing off, or showing power (perhaps catastrophically).” Hm… Maybe there’s a madness hinted at there… Oh! I have an idea: Perhaps the mace is “socially radioactive,” subtly influencing those around it to demonstrate their power, which Orthuun would then want to eliminate. Something like that. Regardless, it gives off an aura that those attuned to feel it will notice.

I have, in the background, fleshed out what the Silent Compact was that battled Orthuun’s forces centuries ago. Three religious orders banded together. One of them was the Tribunal (which you can learn more about in my Caldrien write-up), but let’s use this opportunity to introduce another one, that of Vaelora, the Flame. I like the idea that a priestess of Vaelora has sensed the mace’s presence and is coming to destroy it. That’s enough to guide me and my plot-tracker. Wheee!

XXXII.

Thawmere 12, Wyrdsday, Year 732

“Running was a dumb move, lass,” Maelen muttered grumpily. The warrior peered out of the smoked glass of the chandlery, the window speckled with old wax and soot. The smell of tallow and beeswax hung heavily in the air.

“You’ve only said it half a dozen times,” Vessa replied sourly, crossing her arms. “And okay… I panicked.”

“Not like you,” Maelen squinted. “You’ve had a warrant on your head before.”

“It wasn’t the warrant,” she whispered fiercely. Vessa’s eyes darted to the chandlery’s proprietor, a balding, middle-aged man with a long neck like a turtle. He saw her looking and swallowed hard, turning to needlessly busy himself with shelves crowded with candles, blocks of wax, and little jars of resin. They’d paid him a handful of silver to let the two of them stand in his store and watch the Heart & Dagger’s front door, but she still worried what he might say to a City Watch official if questioned.

An older woman in flowing red robes entered the chandlery with the tinkle of a bell. Maelen and Vessa pretended to be looking at candles as she passed them. She paused and regarded them.

“Ah, Sister Hestara!” the chandler said in greeting, his voice nasal. “A little early for your monthly visit, isn’t it?”

Vessa’s back was to the woman as she did her best to look innocuous. The customer said nothing for a long while, then exhaled audibly. When she spoke, her voice was rich and full. “Yes, Mister Fenn, it is. I was… well, you might say I felt inspired as I passed by this evening. Do you mind if I browse?”

The conversation went on behind them and Vessa leaned close to Maelen. “It wasn’t the warrant,” she repeated in a low whisper. “It was the man! This Brannic, he was there that night, in the alley, don’t you remember?”

Maelen scowled and turned away from the window. “What? Part of the merchant boy’s crew?”

Vessa waved a no and shook her head. “No, just in the alley. I think maybe he was their mark.”

The warrior thought about it, frowning. She leaned over and peered again out of the smudged window, to watch those entering the tavern next door. Eventually, she muttered. “Why would a book merchant’s son try to beat up an Iron Thorn agent? It makes no sense. Anyway, running was still dumb. Who cares if he was in the alley?”

Vessa sighed and took a step to where she could see out between two thick white candles upon a shelf. With the evening twilight and the smudgy glass, it wasn’t the easiest view, but she figured either Alric or Brannic would be easy enough to spot. Her eyes flicked left. Near the Lakeshore Walk, a narrow stone-and-plank promenade that curved around the perimeter of Lake Miran, sat a worn stone bench. Reclining against the bench, arms folded in the chill air, was Rusk. Vessa thought that, if they were going to quickly intercept Alric, it would be best if the hired thug wasn’t with them. Besides, an extra pair of eyes outside always helped.

“Excuse me? Ma’am?” that full, rich voice said from a stride away. Both Maelen and Vessa turned to see the woman in red robes. She was an attractive older woman, perhaps of fifty years, with a defined jaw and intense, pale blue eyes framed by brown hair pulled back in a braid. The clothes were exceptionally well-made, heavy wool with a faint sheen, with black silk cuffs and hood, and cut asymmetrically to cover the left side of her body while leaving her pale right arm and lower leg tastefully exposed. A small brass pendant in the shape of a flame hung at her throat. Ah, Vessa realized. A priestess of the Flame, then, a small religious order who worshipped the Ash Queen. Vessa had never met one who didn’t unsettle her with their zealotry.

The woman’s gaze fell fully on Maelen. The warrior frowned and took her in from head to toe, same as Vessa.

“Yeah?” she grunted.

“That… weapon on your belt,” the woman nodded her head towards the black mace. “Do you mind if I ask how it came into your possession?”

“Listen, lady,” Maelen said dismissively, doing her best to look every bit the street tough. “I do mind. Go away.” And with that, the warrior turned her back on the priestess and crouched to peer again through the window. Somewhere out of sight, the chandler gasped.

The woman looked startled, then a line formed between her eyes and she pressed her lips together, clearly irritated. She cleared her throat. “I am afraid I cannot do that,” she said curtly. “That weapon is demon-born. Give it to me now, in the name of the gods.”

Silence fell in the chandlery. Maelen stood upright, slowly, and turned to regard the priestess. “Excuse me?” she growled, low and mean.

Dang Maelen’s madness! I’m going to have her do a Will save to see if she can master her temper and see this as a terrible time and place to pick a fight. She needs an 11 or lower on d20 and rolls a 16. Sigh. Thankfully, no one else in the chandlery is as interested in violence, but the cleric of Vaelora just went from a potential ally to… decidedly not. Let’s see if I can ramp up some tension here given Maelen’s lack of reason.

Meanwhile, now is a fine time to see who is going to show up first to the Heart & Dagger, Alric or Brannic. I’ll roll a simple high/low and get… Alric. Will Brannic also make it to the tavern before they can leave? For that I’ll do a 50/50 Fate roll, but since the chase I’ll say the Chaos Factor has ramped up to 6. That means there’s a 65% chance of yes, and I roll 94! Nope. He’ll show up later, or else something else is taking up his evening. We’ll see when he (most assuredly) returns!

“Mae…” Vessa whispered urgently, reaching to place a calming hand upon her shoulder. Ever since the Starless Rift, her friend had been… angry. Maelen had always been a bruiser by nature, but one of the things that impressed Vessa early on was the warrior’s ability to reason her way out of a situation. Recently, it was as if she were a beaten dog tied to a post, snapping at anyone who came near. Which, she realized uncomfortably, was very much like the description the seer Wink had given her.

Maelen shrugged off Vessa’s touch and stepped towards the priestess. “You want it?” she sneered, slowly pulling the black mace from her belt loop. “Come take it from me, then.”

Vessa gave the robed woman credit; if the priestess was intimidated, she masked it well. Her eyes momentarily widened at Maelen’s advance and then her face set in determination. “I see,” she said simply. She raised her voice without taking eyes off Maelen. “Mister Fenn? I will not bring trouble to your shop. I might suggest you close up for the evening, however, and call the City Watch if these two trouble you.”

The woman’s posture straightened imperiously as she addressed Maelen. Her friend stopped her advance but tensed, growling low in her throat. “I tell you this now plainly: That weapon is an instrument of destruction. Shadows and darkness follow it, and has likely,” she looked Maelen up and down. “darkened your soul. Bring it to the Temple of the Flame and you can be rid of this burden. I give you two days.”

“Or what?” Maelen snarled, muscles flexing.

The woman’s eyes swung to Vessa. “Two days,” she intoned, and the words struck her like a weight. Then, in a swirl of red fabric, turned and swept out of the chandlery.

The little bell tinkled, and the sound of the door shutting echoed in the small shop. Vessa was stunned, while Maelen panted, mace gripped tightly in her hand. Silence reigned for several heartbeats, and then the shop owner cleared his throat nervously.

“I– I think I will close up now,” he squeaked. “It’s about time.”

“Of course,” Vessa said immediately, before Maelen could yell at the man. “We’re sorry for any trouble.” She moved towards the door. “Come on, Mae.”

Outside, the evening gloom had swallowed the lakeside, and all around them lanterns were being lit upon the street and in windows. Across the street, Rusk hunched his shoulders and pushed off from the bench, sauntering slowly towards them.

“What in blazes was that?” Vessa snapped.

Her friend barked back. “What? She wanted to take it!”

“She wanted to talk,” she corrected. “Then you picked a fight. With a priestess! And what if what she said is true?”

“It’s a weapon,” Maelen grunted. “Of course it’s made for destruction.”

“Not that,” Vessa said. “The part about darkness, and demons. And your soul.”

Rusk was within earshot now and Maelen flicked her gaze towards him. “Enough of that. Leave it. Where’s the bloody lad?”

“There,” Rusk whispered as he joined them, jerking his chin towards the road. Maelen and Vessa turned to see a figure robed in black, hood up and shrouding his face, hobbling towards the Heart & Dagger’s entrance with the help of a wooden staff. The robe, staff, and limp all matched Alric, but the figure was too thin and stooped.

“Not him,” Maelen shook her head. “That’s an old man.”

“Wait,” Vessa cautioned. Her eyes were the keenest of them, and she saw the lamplight play off the runes upon the staff. “I think… I think it may be.” Without waiting for the others to respond, she strode towards the frail, bent figure with purpose. Instinctively, she moved quietly, on guard.

“Alric?” she called out when she was within lunging distance. The figure stopped and turned its hood. She could now clearly see the hands gripping the staff, pale and bony.

“Vessa,” he sighed, relieved. Incongruously, it was Alric’s voice, completely unchanged. “I was going to tell you that we should move our meeting to somewhere more private. Brannic is coming, and wants to speak with you.”

A hand went to her mouth in shock. “What happened to you?”

“Ah, yes, well,” Alric chuckled. She could only see vague details beneath the hood, but what she saw looked skeletal. “I may have tried a new spell, to mixed results.”

“Let’s get out of here,” she gasped, reaching to take one of his arms. It felt shockingly thin. “Let me help you.”

“Much obliged,” he nodded once, with relief.

She helped the unsettlingly frail Alric to Vessa’s inn near the docks. She did not speak with him on the trek, and neither did Maelen. Her friend did shoot her a look when she thought Alric wasn’t looking, though, of pressed lips and concern. Rusk, thankfully, said nothing and followed behind, strolling as if alone and without a care in the world.

It was well after dark when they arrived, but thankfully they never saw the Iron Thorn investigator from earlier that day. The inn was a two-story wedge of weathered timber, sitting slightly askew upon on the dock and between shops that were dark and closed up for the night. A row of iron lantern-hooks ran along the eaves, each lit behind smoky and salt-flecked glass. The signboard outside couldn’t be bothered with iconography, and said, simply enough, “The Swaying Lantern” upon it in plain script.

Inside, the common room was dimly lit by the glow of the large iron stove in the back, sitting squatly behind a long, scarred counter. The tables were narrow and communal—not ideal for them talking, but Vessa had chosen this place precisely because the clientele were usually sailors from other cities, other nations, often speaking only a few words of Calvenori. Few people here cared who they were, and more importantly cared not at all for the warrant attached to her.

She led them across sanded planks, Alric’s limp making a scraping sound across them along with the steady thump thump of his staff, and hailed the innkeeper.

“Voss,” she nodded with a crooked smile. He was a neat, polite, and soft-spoken man with close-cropped hair and no beard, a true surprise in this rough-and-tumble place. Indeed, the innkeeper of the Swaying Lantern reminded her somewhat of Alric, and would have fit better in the Inkbinders Lodge than the Oakton docks. He wiped his hands fastidiously on a white apron and nodded to her.

“How many?” he asked without preamble.

“Four of us,” she said. “But just water for one and two ales for another. And do you still have that crab stew from last night?”

He smiled. “I do indeed.”

“Four bowls of that, then. And bread?”

“I’ll bring them over to you,” he confirmed, and then he bowed slightly. Vessa smiled and hurried back over to the table, where Maelen was already grilling Alric in low, urgent tones.

“About Vessa?” Alric was saying, keeping his hood up and shrouding his face in shadows. “He asked about both of you, how I knew you, that sort of thing.”

“Nothing about her warrant, though?” Maelen asked, scowling.

Alric paused, as if thinking. Vessa couldn’t keep her eyes from his wrist and hands, almost skeletal. What had happened to him? Eventually, his rich baritone voice said. “No, nothing about Vessa specifically at all. It felt like he was just making conversation, honestly. What he really wanted to discuss was a woman named Sera Vellorin.”

“Dammit all to the Rootmother’s teats!” Maelen swore. Vessa winced.

“You know her?” he asked.

“Not directly, no,” Maelen frowned, and her eyes tracked over to Rusk. She clearly still wasn’t sure what she could and couldn’t say in the man’s presence. Vessa cleared her throat when it was clear she wasn’t going to offer more.

“She’s a book merchant,” Vessa offered. Maelen shot her a look that she ignored. “And mother of the kid I stabbed.”

“Oh,” Alric said, cocking his hooded head, as if again thinking. “Interesting. Well, the investigator said she’s bribing Lodge members to gain access to hidden archives. The… uh,” and now his head swept over to Rusk as well. “The forbidden ones.”

Silence fell on the table, and in that silence, Voss brought their food and drink upon a wide tray. He carefully placed each mug and bowl in front of each of them, then doled out four iron spoons and slices of bread upon small wooden plates. With another slight bow, he took his leave. Steam rose from the stew, and the inviting smell of crab and vegetables made Vessa’s mouth water. Rusk dove into his meal with abandon, slurping ale and stew with equal enthusiasm. Alric sipped his water and blew on the stew before trying it.

Maelen hadn’t moved, her mind working over what she’d heard. Eventually, she took a long drink from a mug and said, “Too many damned connections. Lad, what happened to your body? Are you two weak to make some coin?”

“As I told Vessa,” he said after a spoonful. “A spell got away from me, a spell I used to escape the investigator when he began asking about the Lodge. I should recover… I’ll just need to eat. Speaking of which, good stew, Vessa.” Much to her surprise, she felt her cheeks warming in a blush, as if she’d been the one to cook the meal and deserved praise for it.

Flustered, she ran a hand through her hair and said, “Yeah. Voss is a gem. You do think you’ll recover, then?”

He shrugged a thin shoulder. “I suppose. Or, rather, there’s no reason to think that I won’t.” The hood turned again to Maelen. “What did you have in mind, Maelen? For the coin, I mean.”

“I met a guy,” she said, chewing on a piece of bread. “Said he’d found a secret ruin in the city, untouched. Thinks there’s valuables there and promised a cut.”

“Oh, I’m relieved,” Alric chuckled. “That it’s in the city, I mean. I don’t feel up for another trek in the wilds, and I’d like to continue my research.”

“So, that’s a yes, then?” she said, her mouth full. “Vess?”

“I… sure, I guess. But shouldn’t we deal with this Vellorin business?”

Maelen grunted. “It’s too tangled. I can’t see the angle for us. Better we get out of sight for a few days, let it sort itself out. But a secret ruin sounds better to me than running from the Iron Thorn and some shady book dealer.”

And, Vessa thought unkindly, it lets you duck the priestess of the Flame’s attention. Worry knotted in her stomach, then. Could Maelen’s anger issues have to do with the mace? Maelen had said they weren’t related, but maybe her friend’s judgment couldn’t be trusted these days? Her instincts told her that allowing the two-day deadline to pass would lead to trouble, something they already had in vast amounts. Then there was Alric, who—despite his brave words—looked like he should be spending time resting, not tromping through dangerous ruins. Could he even use his magic, now?

She wasn’t sure how long she’d been quiet as these thoughts tumbled through her head. All eyes at the table were fixed on her, waiting. Maelen wouldn’t like her answer, but Vessa thought they should visit the temple of the Flame before making any decisions. She could loan Alric money to continue his research, since she hadn’t managed to spend her spoils from the Starless Rift yet. It might buy him time to recover.

Just then Rusk wiped his mouth and belched. “We’re in,” he said in his low whisper of a voice, thumping his fist on the table for emphasis. “When do we leave?”

Vessa blinked in surprise. Had he just… answered for the both of them? Alric stiffened in his seat, noting the same.

Maelen grinned and nodded at the man. “Tomorrow morning,” she said to them all. “I’ll go now and find Neddy.”

With that, her friend pushed herself from the table, slapped a couple of silver coins onto the table, and stalked out of the inn.

Next …?

Alas, dear reader… I’m sorry to surprise you with the news, but it’s now time for me to hit the pause button on this labor of love. You see, I’ve gotten a new job, which is overall good news. For the first time since the global pandemic, however, I’ll be commuting to an office, during those wee hours that I’ve spent writing. I’ll be too knackered in the evenings to keep up my current writing pace, and weekends will undoubtedly become packed with Adult Stuff™. There will be time for writing (because, let’s face it, I can’t help myself), but it will be catch-as-catch-can instead of 1-2 posts per week.

This story has been a personal triumph. It’s my most committed attempt at a homebrew world, and I’ve fallen in love with Calvenor and its eternal struggle between City-Gods and Demon-Gods. I will absolutely return to this setting and story—especially since this job is likely the last one I’ll do for 4-6 years before retiring. Then I’ll be writing a LOT. I’m too interested in Alric, Vessa, and Maelen’s tale not to return to them. I’ll also keep playing Tales of Argosa—both solo and with friends—as I’ve fallen in love with it as well. Indeed, I suspect that Tales of Argosa, Dungeon Crawl Classics, various superhero games, and some sort of lighter heroic system, will continue to fuel my nerdy imagination until I’m gone from this world.

Never fear: The blog itself is not taking a hiatus. The truth is that my fiction here gets a fraction of the views that my game reviews do, and I have an idea for an ongoing review series that is percolating. Writing reviews, it turns out, is easy to do sporadically and when the spirit moves me, whereas fiction is something that, once started, requires me to keep writing—pretty much daily—to keep the plot and tone in my head. That said, I may throw the occasional short story up here as well. We’ll see. If there’s one thing I’ve realized these past many years, it’s that my own ability to predict the future is basically zero.

As always, feel free to comment below or email me at jaycms@yahoo.com.

ToC31: Brannic Sootward

On By MagicJMSIn Fantasy Fiction, Tabletop Roleplaying, Tales of Calvenor3 Comments

[game-notes version here]

Artwork by © anaislalovi. All rights reserved

XXXI.

Thawmere 12, Wyrdsday, Year 732

Alric stumbled out of the alleyway and into a warehouse district street. Squinting—his eyes still watery from the smoke cloud—he saw the black-clad, Iron Thorn agent across the street, his back to a three-story warehouse. Maelen faced him, fists balled, and to his shock she lunged at him.

The man was her match in speed, however. He turned with the punch, letting it glance off. Maelen overbalanced, hit one knee, and came up cursing.

“Stop!” Alric shouted, limping across the street as quickly as his leg and staff would allow. “Stop, Maelen… stop!”

The man was rubbing his jaw with one hand, eyes flicking between the two of them. His other hand, Alric noted with alarm, had dropped to touch the hilt of his sword. Thankfully Maelen hadn’t reached for her spiked mace, but Alric thought it was only a heartbeat away.

“What’s going on?” Alric asked desperately.

“Shut it, lad,” the warrior spat, meaty fists still up and ready. “He’ll pay for hunting Vess.”

“Pay? Maelen, please! He’s an Iron Thorn agent! He’s the law! We’re not in the wilds anymore!”

The man grunted and threw them both a half grin. “Listen to your friend… Maelen, was it? I’ll give you the punch for free, seein’ as we got off on the wrong foot. Don’t push it, girl.”

“Girl!?” Maelen roared, but Alric put a hand on her shoulder.

“Please!” he hissed.

The warrior growled, low and… hungry? Whatever the sound was, it disturbed him. But she did, after several ragged breaths, back down. With obvious effort, Maelen unclenched her fists.

“Good,” the man winked. “Now, I must say: This whole situation’s makin’ my brain itch. You say the runner’s name is Vess?”

“Vessa,” Alric offered. “Velthorn.”

“Shut it!” Maelen smacked him on the shoulder, causing Alric to stumble.

“And you, young scribe? What’s your name?” the man asked, his gray eyes’ intensity in sharp contrast to his easy smile. His face was a maze of scars, the most pronounced tugging at one side of his mouth.

“A-Alric, sir,” he stammered and stepped out of Maelen’s reach. She growled again, like a caged animal.

“Mistsong, yes?” he said, nodding once, as if confirming a detail. “Just the man I wanted to meet. Good. Maelen?” the Iron Thorn agent said, stepping up to Alric and placing a hand on his shoulder. “Why don’t you run along and go find your friend Vessa. Tell her that Brannic Sootward will be callin’ upon her later this evenin’ to ask a few questions, if you don’t mind.”

“Alric,” Maelen hissed through clenched teeth. “Do not share information with this filthy rat.”

“Maelen, it’s fine. He’s just doing his job!” Alric pleaded. “I haven’t done anything wrong.”

“There, see?” Brannic said, lifting a finger to his jaw where Maelen had struck him. “Civility.”

Maelen didn’t spare a glance at the man. Her eyes were locked on Alric’s. “We’ll meet you for dinner at the regular spot, yeah?”

“And what spot would that be?” Brannic asked.

“The Heart & Dagger,” Alric said, then winced. Maelen threw up her hands in exasperation, looking skyward as if seeking divine aid.

Just then, Rusk stepped out of the alleyway. He certainly hadn’t run after them, and seemed not at all out of breath.

Brannic’s eyes snapped up. “Friend of yours?” he asked.

“No,” Alric said immediately. “We only just met.”

“I’ll go,” Maelen said. “Lad: Be smart,” she pointed a calloused finger accusingly at him. “Use that brain of yours. And you,” the finger swiveled to Brannic. “If he ends up beaten or in a cell somewhere, I’m coming for you.”

Brannic laughed and hauled Alric around, retracing their steps away from the warehouses and back towards the civic rise and the Inkbinders Lodge. His arm was like an iron band, holding Alric in place. Maelen yelled a curse after Brannic, but the man ignored it as if he hadn’t heard.

Alric barely noticed the path they walked. His throat had gone dry… beaten up or in a cell? Could this be about his ongoing bribery of a clerk to gain access to the forbidden stacks? The debt he owed his family for the Thornmere Hold expedition? Could Brannic be an agent of Orthuun? If the mage had a heartbeat, it would be racing. Instead, he found his thoughts jumbled and breath ragged.

The Iron Thorn agent, meanwhile, seemed to eventually realize that Alric couldn’t outrun him even if he tried, so he let go of his shoulder and walked easily beside him. To anyone watching, it might have looked like two longtime friends taking a brisk winter walk through the streets, content in their silence. Only as they’d almost reached the Lodge did Alric realize that Brannic was scanning the foot traffic carefully, looking at rooftops and empty alleyways. Ah. He thought that Alric’s friends might double back to free him and was staying vigilant. At this point, Alric couldn’t tell if he hoped they did so or left him to his fate. He felt off balance and anxious… what was this all about?

Back at the Quiet Margin, the tavern seemed to have recovered from the commotion caused by Vessa’s flight. If anyone recognized Alric or Brannic from before, they didn’t let on, and soon Alric found himself seated across from the scarred investigator, the man’s gray eyes considering him carefully.

“So, Alric. You’re a scribe, then? Part of the Lodge?” he asked, taking such a long a draught of his ale that he must have half-finished it. He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand.

“Y-yes sir,” Alric bobbed his head. He lifted the lapel of his robe as if it helped verify the profession. “A-and I must get back to work, I’m afraid. I had only taken lunch to meet my friends.”

“Mmm,” the man said, taking a long drink to consider. “Friends, is it? How is it you became friends with a couple of mercenaries?”

Alric chuckled nervously. “‘Friends’ might be overstating it. I hired the two of them as bodyguards awhile back, and we’ve stayed in touch. We gathered today after not seeing each other in weeks.”

“Bodyguards?” Brannic quirked a salt-and-pepper eyebrow. “Now what do you need bodyguards for, boy?”

Inwardly, Alric cursed. Somehow this man was able to pry details from him that he didn’t want to share. It was maddening, and he felt awkward and slow. Somehow, he mused grimly, he was able to lie repeatedly about his whereabouts and activities to those within the Lodge, but a single Iron Thorn agent caused him to stutter and jumble his thoughts. It was that damned man Rusk, he thought. Why did Vessa bring him to their lunch? Everything about their reunion had been a mess, and so different from what he’d envisioned.

He brought himself back to the present. Brannic was studying him intently. Use that brain of yours, Maelen had urged him. Right. Stall. Reset. Find an exit.

“You look as if you’ve finished your ale,” Alric pointed out. “Shall I order another round?”

Brannic didn’t speak for a long beat, then smirked. “Sure. Don’t run.”

“Please,” Alric said without humor. “I know my limitations.” With weariness, he stood and leaned on his rune-carved staff. He nodded to the man and, with his limp exaggerated, moved to the bar. His mind whirled. Why was Brannic asking these questions? Had Vessa recognized him and bolted, or was she simply assuming it had something to do with her warrant? More urgently: How could he leave this conversation quickly, and without revealing everything he’d learned about the Silent Compact? About Orthuun?

He returned with one mug and placed it in front of Brannic, who waited with casual ease.

“Not another for you?” he said, raising the mug in salute before taking another long drink.

“It goes to my head,” Alric shrugged. “And I must be getting back to my duties at the Lodge. Might we get to why you wanted to speak with me, sir?”

“In a bit,” he smiled, waving a hand. “First, you were tellin’ me why you needed Maelen and Vessa as bodyguards? Not usual for a scribe, is it?”

“It’s not,” Alric admitted, exhaling and trying to regain his wits. “I was exploring a rumor I’d discovered in a scroll—a reputed hidden tomb in the wilds. They were to keep me safe on the journey.”

“In the wilds? My my. Dangerous business to be sure. What did you find?” he asked casually.

“Only a rumor,” Alric said, with practiced disappointment. Brannic narrowed his eyes, and Alric had no idea if the lie had landed well. “But they did their jobs, which is why I’m still here.” He smiled.

“Hmph. Well, Alric, if you don’t mind my sayin’, the Lodge has you workin’ too hard. You look about to fall over and like you haven’t slept in days.”

Alric said nothing. His fingers were intertwined atop the table’s surface to calm his nerves.

Another pause, and then Brannic asked. “Do you know the name Sera Vellorin?”

Alric blinked, suddenly off guard again. “No,” he said truthfully. “Should I?”

“Mmm,” the scarred man said, picking idly with a finger at a crease in the wood of the table. “She’s been bribin’ some people within your Lodge to gain access to some secret archives or somethin’. What would you–”

Brannic continued to speak but Alric lost the words as he panicked. The mention of “secret archives” made him certain that this Iron Thorn investigator had come to arrest him for his own bribery, to link him somehow to this Sera person. The crowd around them swam in his vision, and Alric suddenly felt dizzy. Without realizing he was doing so, he began muttering beneath his breath, feeling his limbs deaden as he drew on the power of the demon Orthuun. His fingers moved with purpose as the magic took form.

Brannic was quite correct when he said that Alric needed sleep. He’d spent his recent weeks in Oakton uncovering the history of the Silent Compact, but those were his daytime activities. At night, his weary eyes had been buried in the Tome of Unlit Paths, desperately attempting to learn how to harness the power of the demon without losing himself to darkness. In doing so, he’d realized how Hadren Kelthorn had escaped their tavern meeting months before when they’d first met the man, the precise spell he’d cast.

Alric hissed the final, sibilant words and the world around him lost all color. Across the table, a black-and-white Brannic stood abruptly, a sudden knife in one hand. Others in the tavern saw the weapon and screamed, pushing themselves away from the Iron Thorn agent. None of them saw Alric, however, as, to them, he’d disappeared in a sudden circle of ash.

“Alric Darkheart…” a voice rasped. Near him was the shade of Hadren, watching him with grey lights in his eye sockets and floating above the tavern floor. He did not move his slack lips, but somehow the words still whispered directly into Alric’s ears.

Something had gone wild and unchecked from the spell he’d cast. It was as if Orthuun’s power not only deadened his body but was pulling his very essence away. He swung his wide eyes from Hadren to the door of the tavern, stumbling through the startled crowd.

“Dark… heart…” the voice echoed, more distantly now. Alric spared a look over his shoulder. Hadren hadn’t moved. The shade floated within a press of individuals pushing away from Brannic, the investigator scanning the table and looking wholly unnerved. A group of robed bystanders were pointing at the circle of ash around Alric’s former chair.

Three young clerks blocked his way to the exit. With an exasperated shove, he broke through them as they felt themselves tossed aside by an invisible force. Alric hurled himself bodily against the door, opening it and gasping into a grayscale Oakton. The force of the spell was still pulling at him, eating away at something he knew was vital. But he couldn’t appear out of nowhere in front of the Inkbinders Lodge, with all to see. He kept his invisibility intact as he limped towards a narrow alleyway, feeling his life drain away with every step. Get out of sight, he thought desperately, and then end the spell.

With a groan, the young man pulled himself into shelter and released Orthuun’s power. As soon as it ended, he doubled over, panting and clinging to his staff.

He did not yet see his shadow, moving independently and raising its arms in triumph beside him.

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ToC31: Brannic Sootward [with game notes]

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Do I wish Downtime had been long enough for Maelen to clear her rage madness? Yes, yes I do. I worry that she’ll become too one-dimensional of a character. But I do have to admit… her madness makes for some fun story beats.

Per the Tales of Argosa rulebook, all characters are trained in unarmed brawling, and attacks do 1d2 damage plus Str modifiers. Brannic’s AC is 14 and Maelen has a +5 to hit. She rolls a 12 and hits, doing 3 damage and bringing the Iron Thorn investigator’s hit points to 17. She’ll also try a Minor Exploit to knock him down with the blow. Doing so requires an opposed Str check: Maelen fails with an 18 and Brannic has a Great Success with a 6. Not even close.

Here’s the important roll: How does Brannic react? I’ll roll a Reaction roll on the “Human, Guard” table at -2 because of the punch. An adjusted 7 is Difficult, barely avoiding Hostile. Good enough.

XXXI.

Thawmere 12, Wyrdsday, Year 732

Alric stumbled out of the alleyway and into a warehouse district street. Squinting—his eyes still watery from the smoke cloud—he saw the black-clad, Iron Thorn agent across the street, his back to a three-story warehouse. Maelen faced him, fists balled, and to his shock she lunged at him.

The man was her match in speed, however. He turned with the punch, letting it glance off. Maelen overbalanced, hit one knee, and came up cursing.

“Stop!” Alric shouted, limping across the street as quickly as his leg and staff would allow. “Stop, Maelen… stop!”

The man was rubbing his jaw with one hand, eyes flicking between the two of them. His other hand, Alric noted with alarm, had dropped to touch the hilt of his sword. Thankfully Maelen hadn’t reached for her spiked mace, but Alric thought it was only a heartbeat away.

“What’s going on?” Alric asked desperately.

“Shut it, lad,” the warrior spat, meaty fists still up and ready. “He’ll pay for hunting Vess.”

“Pay? Maelen, please! He’s an Iron Thorn agent! He’s the law! We’re not in the wilds anymore!”

The man grunted and threw them both a half grin. “Listen to your friend… Maelen, was it? I’ll give you the punch for free, seein’ as we got off on the wrong foot. Don’t push it, girl.”

“Girl!?” Maelen roared, but Alric put a hand on her shoulder.

“Please!” he hissed.

The warrior growled, low and… hungry? Whatever the sound was, it disturbed him. But she did, after several ragged breaths, back down. With obvious effort, Maelen unclenched her fists.

“Good,” the man winked. “Now, I must say: This whole situation’s makin’ my brain itch. You say the runner’s name is Vess?”

“Vessa,” Alric offered. “Velthorn.”

“Shut it!” Maelen smacked him on the shoulder, causing Alric to stumble.

“And you, young scribe? What’s your name?” the man asked, his gray eyes’ intensity in sharp contrast to his easy smile. His face was a maze of scars, the most pronounced tugging at one side of his mouth.

“A-Alric, sir,” he stammered and stepped out of Maelen’s reach. She growled again, like a caged animal.

“Mistsong, yes?” he said, nodding once, as if confirming a detail. “Just the man I wanted to meet. Good. Maelen?” the Iron Thorn agent said, stepping up to Alric and placing a hand on his shoulder. “Why don’t you run along and go find your friend Vessa. Tell her that Brannic Sootward will be callin’ upon her later this evenin’ to ask a few questions, if you don’t mind.”

“Alric,” Maelen hissed through clenched teeth. “Do not share information with this filthy rat.”

“Maelen, it’s fine. He’s just doing his job!” Alric pleaded. “I haven’t done anything wrong.”

“There, see?” Brannic said, lifting a finger to his jaw where Maelen had struck him. “Civility.”

Maelen didn’t spare a glance at the man. Her eyes were locked on Alric’s. “We’ll meet you for dinner at the regular spot, yeah?”

“And what spot would that be?” Brannic asked.

“The Heart & Dagger,” Alric said, then winced. Maelen threw up her hands in exasperation, looking skyward as if seeking divine aid.

Just then, Rusk stepped out of the alleyway. He certainly hadn’t run after them, and seemed not at all out of breath.

Brannic’s eyes snapped up. “Friend of yours?” he asked.

“No,” Alric said immediately. “We only just met.”

“I’ll go,” Maelen said. “Lad: Be smart,” she pointed a calloused finger accusingly at him. “Use that brain of yours. And you,” the finger swiveled to Brannic. “If he ends up beaten or in a cell somewhere, I’m coming for you.”

Just for fun, let’s do a Will or Cha check for Maelen (they’re both 11) to see how well the threat lands. She rolls a 15. Well, bummer.

Brannic laughed and hauled Alric around, retracing their steps away from the warehouses and back towards the civic rise and the Inkbinders Lodge. His arm was like an iron band, holding Alric in place. Maelen yelled a curse after Brannic, but the man ignored it as if he hadn’t heard.

Alric barely noticed the path they walked. His throat had gone dry… beaten up or in a cell? Could this be about his ongoing bribery of a clerk to gain access to the forbidden stacks? The debt he owed his family for the Thornmere Hold expedition? Could Brannic be an agent of Orthuun? If the mage had a heartbeat, it would be racing. Instead, he found his thoughts jumbled and breath ragged.

The Iron Thorn agent, meanwhile, seemed to eventually realize that Alric couldn’t outrun him even if he tried, so he let go of his shoulder and walked easily beside him. To anyone watching, it might have looked like two longtime friends taking a brisk winter walk through the streets, content in their silence. Only as they’d almost reached the Lodge did Alric realize that Brannic was scanning the foot traffic carefully, looking at rooftops and empty alleyways. Ah. He thought that Alric’s friends might double back to free him and was staying vigilant. At this point, Alric couldn’t tell if he hoped they did so or left him to his fate. He felt off balance and anxious… what was this all about?

Back at the Quiet Margin, the tavern seemed to have recovered from the commotion caused by Vessa’s flight. If anyone recognized Alric or Brannic from before, they didn’t let on, and soon Alric found himself seated across from the scarred investigator, the man’s gray eyes considering him carefully.

“So, Alric. You’re a scribe, then? Part of the Lodge?” he asked, taking such a long a draught of his ale that he must have half-finished it. He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand.

“Y-yes sir,” Alric bobbed his head. He lifted the lapel of his robe as if it helped verify the profession. “A-and I must get back to work, I’m afraid. I had only taken lunch to meet my friends.”

“Mmm,” the man said, taking a long drink to consider. “Friends, is it? How is it you became friends with a couple of mercenaries?”

I haven’t done any “social combat” scenes in this story yet, but to me they’re part of the fun of urban adventures, whether they’re between thieves lying to escape a guard or royal maneuverings in court. The Tales of Argosa rulebook, sadly, only dedicates a single page to influencing NPCs, and essentially boils it down to a single Charisma role, often with skills or other modifiers. That’s good for many situations (like when Alric talked his way out of Oakton in the first story), but here I want it to be a bit more involved. Brannic wants to interrogate Alric, both because the scribe is part of his investigation and about Vessa. Alric, meanwhile, is now suitably paranoid about the consequences of this conversation and wants to get out of this situation quickly and without incident. You know what that sounds like to me?

It sounds like a Chase.

Let’s set it up the same as Vessa’s chase: Alric starts a minimum distance away, 4 “lengths,” with Brannic in pursuit. If Brannic “catches” him, Alric reveals everything he knows about the forbidden archives (likely getting himself arrested). I’ll keep the Vessa info as a sweetener depending on the rolls.

Here we go with the first of six “legs” of the conversation: Alric will roll a Cha(Deception) check against Cha(Gather Info). Both characters have the needed skills, and both have 13 Charisma scores. That makes it an even 14 vs 14 target. On the first roll, both fail with a 18 & 17, respectively! So, no ground made up either way. I’ll also use the Chase Event table and see if I can interpret it for a social situation: I roll Snap Opportunity, which allows Alric to make a quick action. Seeing that Brannic is a drinker, he’ll order him another round of drinks to try and make him drunk (-2 on the next roll). I’ll give Brannic a Con roll to see if he succumbs. He just passes. Oh well. Worth a shot!

The second leg: Alric again fails with a 16 but Brannic has a Great Success with a 7. Uh oh. That’s two lengths covered, which means only 2 remaining. To make matters worse, I roll Random Setback, Lost, which means Alric needs to make an Int check or get confused and lose the Chase. It’s his turn to just pass, but he does so with another 16. For Brannic’s Great Success, I’ll give him all the Vessa info he needs to make the connection to the fateful night when Vessa stabbed Joryn Vellorin.

Third leg: Alric rolls a THIRD 16, failing, but so does Brannic. The distance between them stays at two lengths. I roll All In!, which means in a group chase that all characters would be allowed an action. Since it’s just Alric, I’ll take the spirit of the “All In!” title and say he gets desperate and tries to cast a spell: A Wisp Unseen (i.e. invisibility), pulling the same maneuver as Hadren Kelthorn to kick off Story 2. He now must roll a successful Int(Arcane Lore) check and rolls a nat-1! That’s a Great Success, obviously, and means he could have made a second person invisible as well. For the lucky roll, I’ll say this will effectively end the Chase and let him get away. However, there’s still the DDM roll. I didn’t reset Alric’s DDM number after Downtime, so it’s still 3. He must roll higher on a 1d8 and rolls… a 1.

Hoo boy. So, to recap: Alric failed all three Chase rolls and now has negative effects from his spellcasting. But he gets away!

I mentioned that I was so enamored with my Orthuun patron write-up for Dungeon Crawl Classics that I would adopt the Taint and Corruption tables from it for Alric. As a result, I first roll a 1d6 per my Invoke Patron failure table and get another 1! Poor Alric. That’s a roll on both patron taint and corruption tables. For corruption, I’ll use my Cloak of Shadow table and get “The caster becomes painfully gaunt, as if sucked dry of life force.” Okay, makes sense, and I’ll treat it as an injury that could get healed in the next Downtime, and will also knock a point off his Constitution for it. And now for the taint roll? I roll a 6, “When this taint is first rolled, the caster’s shadow acts independently from the caster, often still when the caster is moving and vice-versa.” Okay! Done and done. Poor Alric… he just gets creepier, and how is this creepiness going to affect his courting of Vessa?!

Regardless, the Chase is over after 3 legs and he’s escaped the encounter (just as happened with Vessa!), despite failing his rolls. Fun! Oh, and Alric’s DDM number is now thankfully back to 1.

Alric chuckled nervously. “‘Friends’ might be overstating it. I hired the two of them as bodyguards awhile back, and we’ve stayed in touch. We gathered today after not seeing each other in weeks.”

“Bodyguards?” Brannic quirked a salt-and-pepper eyebrow. “Now what do you need bodyguards for, boy?”

Inwardly, Alric cursed. Somehow this man was able to pry details from him that he didn’t want to share. It was maddening, and he felt awkward and slow. Somehow, he mused grimly, he was able to lie repeatedly about his whereabouts and activities to those within the Lodge, but a single Iron Thorn agent caused him to stutter and jumble his thoughts. It was that damned man Rusk, he thought. Why did Vessa bring him to their lunch? Everything about their reunion had been a mess, and so different from what he’d envisioned.

He brought himself back to the present. Brannic was studying him intently. Use that brain of yours, Maelen had urged him. Right. Stall. Reset. Find an exit.

“You look as if you’ve finished your ale,” Alric pointed out. “Shall I order another round?”

Brannic didn’t speak for a long beat, then smirked. “Sure. Don’t run.”

“Please,” Alric said without humor. “I know my limitations.” With weariness, he stood and leaned on his rune-carved staff. He nodded to the man and, with his limp exaggerated, moved to the bar. His mind whirled. Why was Brannic asking these questions? Had Vessa recognized him and bolted, or was she simply assuming it had something to do with her warrant? More urgently: How could he leave this conversation quickly, and without revealing everything he’d learned about the Silent Compact? About Orthuun?

He returned with one mug and placed it in front of Brannic, who waited with casual ease.

“Not another for you?” he said, raising the mug in salute before taking another long drink.

“It goes to my head,” Alric shrugged. “And I must be getting back to my duties at the Lodge. Might we get to why you wanted to speak with me, sir?”

“In a bit,” he smiled, waving a hand. “First, you were tellin’ me why you needed Maelen and Vessa as bodyguards? Not usual for a scribe, is it?”

“It’s not,” Alric admitted, exhaling and trying to regain his wits. “I was exploring a rumor I’d discovered in a scroll—a reputed hidden tomb in the wilds. They were to keep me safe on the journey.”

“In the wilds? My my. Dangerous business to be sure. What did you find?” he asked casually.

“Only a rumor,” Alric said, with practiced disappointment. Brannic narrowed his eyes, and Alric had no idea if the lie had landed well. “But they did their jobs, which is why I’m still here.” He smiled.

“Hmph. Well, Alric, if you don’t mind my sayin’, the Lodge has you workin’ too hard. You look about to fall over and like you haven’t slept in days.”

Alric said nothing. His fingers were intertwined atop the table’s surface to calm his nerves.

Another pause, and then Brannic asked. “Do you know the name Sera Vellorin?”

Alric blinked, suddenly off guard again. “No,” he said truthfully. “Should I?”

“Mmm,” the scarred man said, picking idly with a finger at a crease in the wood of the table. “She’s been bribin’ some people within your Lodge to gain access to some secret archives or somethin’. What would you–”

Brannic continued to speak but Alric lost the words as he panicked. The mention of “secret archives” made him certain that this Iron Thorn investigator had come to arrest him for his own bribery, to link him somehow to this Sera person. The crowd around them swam in his vision, and Alric suddenly felt dizzy. Without realizing he was doing so, he began muttering beneath his breath, feeling his limbs deaden as he drew on the power of the demon Orthuun. His fingers moved with purpose as the magic took form.

Brannic was quite correct when he said that Alric needed sleep. He’d spent his recent weeks in Oakton uncovering the history of the Silent Compact, but those were his daytime activities. At night, his weary eyes had been buried in the Tome of Unlit Paths, desperately attempting to learn how to harness the power of the demon without losing himself to darkness. In doing so, he’d realized how Hadren Kelthorn had escaped their tavern meeting months before when they’d first met the man, the precise spell he’d cast.

Alric hissed the final, sibilant words and the world around him lost all color. Across the table, a black-and-white Brannic stood abruptly, a sudden knife in one hand. Others in the tavern saw the weapon and screamed, pushing themselves away from the Iron Thorn agent. None of them saw Alric, however, as, to them, he’d disappeared in a sudden circle of ash.

“Alric Darkheart…” a voice rasped. Near him was the shade of Hadren, watching him with grey lights in his eye sockets and floating above the tavern floor. He did not move his slack lips, but somehow the words still whispered directly into Alric’s ears.

Something had gone wild and unchecked from the spell he’d cast. It was as if Orthuun’s power not only deadened his body but was pulling his very essence away. He swung his wide eyes from Hadren to the door of the tavern, stumbling through the startled crowd.

“Dark… heart…” the voice echoed, more distantly now. Alric spared a look over his shoulder. Hadren hadn’t moved. The shade floated within a press of individuals pushing away from Brannic, the investigator scanning the table and looking wholly unnerved. A group of robed bystanders were pointing at the circle of ash around Alric’s former chair.

Three young clerks blocked his way to the exit. With an exasperated shove, he broke through them as they felt themselves tossed aside by an invisible force. Alric hurled himself bodily against the door, opening it and gasping into a grayscale Oakton. The force of the spell was still pulling at him, eating away at something he knew was vital. But he couldn’t appear out of nowhere in front of the Inkbinders Lodge, with all to see. He kept his invisibility intact as he limped towards a narrow alleyway, feeling his life drain away with every step. Get out of sight, he thought desperately, and then end the spell.

With a groan, the young man pulled himself into shelter and released Orthuun’s power. As soon as it ended, he doubled over, panting and clinging to his staff.

He did not yet see his shadow, moving independently and raising its arms in triumph beside him.

Next: Two Days [with game notes]